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for Accidentally In Love

by Daydreamer79

person lo
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, the story around the relationship really made this a great piece. You did a good job with your sex scene as well,and I liked how they interacted with each other it was both sweet and sexy.
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D'aawwww :D I'm a suckr for happeh endings<3333 (and hardcore sex with dirtytalk >3< )
person nivell
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was soo cute! I really liked the fact that you made them high school students and Itachi was taking care of his mother and brother..wish it was a little longer! Maybe you could write a sequel to this?
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a pairing I typically read, but I liked this story. Good job on it.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I really liked how Kisame wasn't far from his character in Naruto but in a way he was...great how you wrote it. Really a good story and I look forward to reading more of your one shots
person caidanu
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know this is the second Kisame/Itachi fic that I have read and enjoyed. Honestly I could never get into this pairing but damn lady... you did a great job with this : )

I really enjoyed the plot to this; it's nice to read a fic where Itachi and Sasuke aren't loaded and the fact that their parents got divorced instead of killed was a pleasant change. Oh god, and the smut was freakin sexy as hell. I love it when Itachi loses control and goes crazy when he's getting screwed into a bed (well, any surface will do, really). I always imagine Itachi to be very passionate in the bedroom.

Thanks so much for sharing this : )

PS. I love Weight of the Heart so far (2 chapters in) but I'm going to wait until the y! isn't in read only mode so that I can fav and review each chapter. Love you babe!