rate_review Reviews

Well I certainly didn't mind the opening. It had avery comfortable feeling about it like they're an old married couple.^^ I wish I was good enough to be ur beta cuz I'd jump at the chance. I also am horrible with ideas cuz I'm not a writer. I hope and pray u get a beta so u can finish this fic in particular. ^^

I do like this chapter even though it's short and took so long. I am a little confused about when it is though. You said before that it was supposed to be just a few days later than the prologue, but from the way they act it has to be longer. Oh well, I'm really interested to see the hospital part. I want to know how Naruto is going to take Sasuke dragging him there without his knowledge too. Maybe there will be more angst and hopefully some sweet, romantic and sad lovin' coming up too. Please continue!!

I like this and really want to see more. Mpregs are my guilty pleasure. ^_^ I hope you continue this.

your gonna try to make me cry arn't you. it's leading somewhere sad! i just know it. then im gonna beat you!

still wuv you though.

go get the next one up.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I don't mind how it opened. I thought it was rather sweet. And it's okay that it was unbetaed. At least it was legible and I understood where you were going with everything unlike a lot of the stories on all the sites. I hope to see more soon and not just because you're right, it was short. Update please!