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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this! I just loved how this was written. Would love to see more Akatsuki X you fics. You wrote Kisame perfectly, a lot of people either make him too soft or too rough but you got just the right mix for him I do believe. Loved how you kept realistic to the fact that Kisame doesn't get touched too often, it seems like a lot of fan girls want to make him into this perfect sex god, however after seeing the short clip with him talking to Deidara I just don't see him getting laid too often. Then theres of course the other extreme where people want to put him off as some sort of mass rapist, I mean yeah I guess I could see him taking advantage of a girl in the right situation but I just don't see the mass rapist of the night running around pillaging woman all night long. I think Kisame has some dignity, and even if he didn't I don't think Itachi would tolerate having a mass rapist as a partner.
Wonderful job! Would love seeing more Kisame fics from you!
-Kirara
Wonderful job! Would love seeing more Kisame fics from you!
-Kirara
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story. All your stories have been great. But this story really put Kisame in a whole new light. I never really thought of him like that. Great job. I can't wait to read more of your stories ^_^
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you-fics! Never really cared about Kisame before but now.... o_o
Great fanfic! Looking forward to reading more. :)
Great fanfic! Looking forward to reading more. :)
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 and 4 -
Oh they were both great! Very entertaining and interesting...I never really thought much of Kisame, aside that he was an awesome ninja, but now...*blush* teehee...he's gone up on my list of favorites...though he can never replace Deidara, Kankuro, or Kiba from my top three...he's a close six though...anyway there were still a few mispelled words, but like I said before they were easy to figure out without having to sit there and wonder about the word for aminute...
I really like your writing style and I enjoy the 'reader inserts' also if you like reading them too I have a story on fanfiction that's a reader insert. Its from my other name 'LostsoulofRegret' and the stories called, '7 Minutes in Naruto Heaven' may sound cliche and dumb but I made sure it sounds right. I had actually wanted to place it on Quizilla but then they changed the story making thing so you can't really do a sort of quiz story anymore...which sucks ass!! but then since I had like four chapters of it done I decided to place it somewhere. I am thinking about doing one with lemons as well after this one is done of course, but then those would be longer and more indepth than the ones I have for my other story...
Anywho I've taken much of your time, if you want check it out and leave a review/comment I'm almost done with it got like four more people to go or something...also I cannot wait for more from ya!! So be quick, but not too quick that you rush yourself!
Check ya later...
Death18
Oh they were both great! Very entertaining and interesting...I never really thought much of Kisame, aside that he was an awesome ninja, but now...*blush* teehee...he's gone up on my list of favorites...though he can never replace Deidara, Kankuro, or Kiba from my top three...he's a close six though...anyway there were still a few mispelled words, but like I said before they were easy to figure out without having to sit there and wonder about the word for aminute...
I really like your writing style and I enjoy the 'reader inserts' also if you like reading them too I have a story on fanfiction that's a reader insert. Its from my other name 'LostsoulofRegret' and the stories called, '7 Minutes in Naruto Heaven' may sound cliche and dumb but I made sure it sounds right. I had actually wanted to place it on Quizilla but then they changed the story making thing so you can't really do a sort of quiz story anymore...which sucks ass!! but then since I had like four chapters of it done I decided to place it somewhere. I am thinking about doing one with lemons as well after this one is done of course, but then those would be longer and more indepth than the ones I have for my other story...
Anywho I've taken much of your time, if you want check it out and leave a review/comment I'm almost done with it got like four more people to go or something...also I cannot wait for more from ya!! So be quick, but not too quick that you rush yourself!
Check ya later...
Death18
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 - (I do this since they dont differentiate chapters) -
Sorry I didn't review before...busy...anywho...This was great! I love all your 'reader insert' stories! Their so awesome and interesting, especially the pairings you choose to write about like Kakuza (sp?) and Kisame. I really can't wait for the smut, but I'm sure I'll read both parts if nothing else...
You did have a few errors, but it was just stuff that happens when you type too fast when inspirition hits ya which I know how that feels. All I can say is look over it once more after you're done typing to see if you can catch your mistakes, though there was nothing too major.
Update soon again please! Also I'm looking forward to more pairings of 'reader insert' X Akatsuki character...makes me wonder who's next? I wouldn't mind either Hidan or Itachi...maybe Sasori if you could make that work (which I've read that some have...) anywho can't wait for more!! You rock!
Check ya later...
Death18
Sorry I didn't review before...busy...anywho...This was great! I love all your 'reader insert' stories! Their so awesome and interesting, especially the pairings you choose to write about like Kakuza (sp?) and Kisame. I really can't wait for the smut, but I'm sure I'll read both parts if nothing else...
You did have a few errors, but it was just stuff that happens when you type too fast when inspirition hits ya which I know how that feels. All I can say is look over it once more after you're done typing to see if you can catch your mistakes, though there was nothing too major.
Update soon again please! Also I'm looking forward to more pairings of 'reader insert' X Akatsuki character...makes me wonder who's next? I wouldn't mind either Hidan or Itachi...maybe Sasori if you could make that work (which I've read that some have...) anywho can't wait for more!! You rock!
Check ya later...
Death18
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha, that sounds quite a bit like me, minor details aside. Thumbs up thus far.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I...freaking...loved this! I've never really thought about Kisame in anyway but now...after reading this I may have a new obsession...and feel a strange urge to go and buy a fish lol. You're stories are a pleasure to read my dear and I hope you write more like these! I wouldn’t mind seeing one with Itachi or Gaara! *eyebrow wiggle*
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, I like. Especially Part 4. I had to read both, naturally.
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Augh! I need MOAR! Please?
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never really liked Kisame all that much, but now I REALLY want to find out what happens. Plus, I LOVE you-fics.