rate_review Reviews

This was another great 1. The only thing that could have made it better is if it as longer.

Well,

for me the story was rather dissatisfying. It was very well written and had a nice concept behind it. But in the end it was just another of those PWPs. It's not that I don't like reading those as well; I just hate it when stories pretend to have a plot and conflicts when their only goal is the sex.

The lemon was hot, the plot was a disappointment. What about the fact that Sasuke wasn't honest with Naruto? What about those TEN YEARS they spent apart?! What about his incestuous relationship wiht Itachi? Is that just meaningless in the face of getting those three intp bed with each other a.s.a.p.? If it was, just skip it and make this PWP. If you take your plots serious, let it have an actual influence on the story.

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Frühling

That was so hot!! I love this story! I love all your stories! I can't wait until you update again. Ja Ne!

well now thats one hell of a homecomeing lol well done thanks

Itachi can give me medication anytime rofl ^_^

tight. . .

You write brilliand 'SIN' I loved it even though it was one chapter you made a complete story. I was very satisfied at the end. Poor Naruto didn't have a chance with those two.