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for You're My Boyfriend Tonight

by DrainBamage954

schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so amusing XD
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was your first time writing smut?!? Are you kidding?! That was metal melting hawt! I loved this! I thought the title was interesting and I saw it on Prism's favorites list. I am soooooo glad I read this! You should so change like...3 words... then repost it so that other people can see it on the "latest" list which is mainly what I check. Thanks so much for posting!!!
person ky0kichi
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dunno why this only has 5 reviews.. It's great. I loved it. Haha.
person Aimereta
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.o your first time writing smut??? Wow that was amazing!!! I bow to you *does cute chibi bow* lolz
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's great *___* !!!
I absolutely love it, it made me laugh really hard sometimes ^^ and the action... awwwwww *drools over keyboard*
Me can has another? ;) *head tilt*
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was so pretty. i think only a person who has ever been intoxicated would understand this.

i do hope that they'll stay boyfriends :)
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work. Vivid imagery.
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one shot...I would like to see it become more....but that is just the greedy part of me speaking any time I read good stuff it leaves me craving more..and that was good smutt...I can imagine it is hard to write a Lemon your first time..Thanks for sharing.