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by TheSimi

person inuspike
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was excellent. hahaha I laughed so hard when Sasuke started freaking out about the camera... then laughed even harder when Itachi teased the poor little bastard. lol Ah, anyway, wonderful oneshot, I thoroughly enjoyed it. ^^
person nivell
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the dirty poems were so cute and funny and the sex was hot! I love a sexy, in-control Sasu-uke!
person Tess
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sexy as all hell, but...condoms please? Safe sex makes the sex sexier.
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha that was cute and steamy XD Good work!
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this sweet "courting" of Sasuke...great juicy lemon..Great one Shot!!! Thank you
person blueh
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ILU SO MUCH ASH HUNNY~~~ And I knew it was gonna be hella hot and funny! *sways left and right*

wonder if the bulge inside Naruto’s black slacks were natural or if the blond was one of those insecure losers who filled up the empty space with a rolled up sock. – priceless. How can he doubt Naruto’s package?? I wonder if some guys really do that.

Naruto was nothing but a moron of the highest degree – LOL! A compliment perhaps?

To Naruto this wasn’t a onetime thing, it was the beginning of forever. – my heart literally melt. *snuggles*

And damn, Sasuke’s demands are so HOT. He knows what he wants. Why do prissy bastards make such hot bottoms? And LOL, trust Itachi to catch Sasuke’s dirty deeds. I bet Itachi kept the tape for himself.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WINNER!!!!!
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice Nice ^^ XD love the end, I mean someone as to know jejejejeje.