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for The Dangers of Passing Notes

by lexjamandme

person momhuey8
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect!
person Touya06
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!

I definitely loved this story. The detail put into it was delicious, lol.

Look forward to more like it. Keep up the great work.
person dhur
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! I loved this story!!! HAhahaha who knew smut could be this much fun!!! I really hope for another chapter!! Naruto got owned and it was wonderful!!! I love sasuke and his evil little ways. Oh and your writing is fabulous.....the description and style is great!! I enjoyed it immensely!!
person roro237
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was the best nyquil sex I ever had I mean read or dreamed:) I haven't been to this site in a while and to my great pleasure you have a story up! So I started doing the old school cabbage. ^_^ I loved it! Even when you're sick you're still the BomB BabY!
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy-- how can something be so freaking hot and hilarious and brilliant all at once?! Loved it so much, wow..

I have no better words at the moment except.. I think I love Nyquil's effects lol
person Timber
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh!!! That was like very EROTIC!! HOT!! I LOVE IT!! I just loved the entire story....and was like either grinning or blushing throughout the entire thing!! Plus I'm like so jealous......please send those kinds of dreams my way!!LOL I would love to have a dream like that.....much better then the dull ones I have of work about projects that I'm working on that even bother my sleep....ugh...sooooooo sad.....sniff....I so want your kinds of dreams....LOL :)


I just love your work and am looking forward to your next story!!! YAY
person Jess
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and funny. If my stomach didn't already hurt from coughing I'd say it was from laughing at the end so much.
Thank you for the great read.
person cynaga
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One of the best oneshots I've read - delightful and clever premise and oh so smexy hot. Thanks~!
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nyquil gets your figurative "quill" going...that was great and what a way for Sasuke to apologize and get a little punishment in...poor Naruto...I told Jelp earlier this week that I am filled with giddiness any time I see your name her name dark's name pass through the screen...I'm so glad you got your creative juices flowing even when you are not feeling so well..Hope you feel better soon and thank you for such a great One shot!
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God. I love your stories, every single one of them and work like this is why. Good work!