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by Jelp

person lara5170
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story was very good, but that twist with Naruto being a demon had me wanting to know more about what he was. Like what type of demon and other stuff since the only proof he seemed to offer was the liquid stuff that healed Sasuke.
person moodysavage
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Honestly...it's 3 AM and I'm still reading your stories. LET ME GET SOME SLEEP ALREADY! *sigh* But I just had to keep reading. I rarely read demon/bondage/oxygen deprived type stories because I tend to not like them. They rely too much on those elements instead of making me like the characters. But I really liked Naruto in this and him as the hidden lover was totally sexy. I love this kind of plot line. Reminds me of my earliest "boy likes girl" daydreams of getting kissed by an unknown mystery person in one of those tunnel of love type rides lol. Ok I'll quit before I embarrass myself some more.
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEL!!!! :) LOVE IT!!! I just adore the whole story from start to finish!!! Such a fresh and bold approach of our two favorite characters!!! I felt the characters were nicely developed with their personalities and background.......this story was really enjoyable and fun to read!!!
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 3
I really enjoyed your poem!! It's a gift most of us do not have and I admire it when I get to read poems I like from others!!! I couldn't write a poem to save my life....LOL

Plus must tell you .....I just love all the facts or bits of info you give us about things I never new about!! I love to learn about other traditions and such.....its a lot of fun!!!

Bride of the Water God By Mi-Kyung Yun is an amazing story....I'm collecting it as each volume comes out.....such LOVELY artwork and characters!!
person Taka
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! i absolutley love it!!!! i can't believe its over ToT i hate letting go such a great thing!!!! the ending was perfect!!!! thank god you're a fucking genius!!!! and i have to admit that i can't stop reading your stuff!!! pure genius!
person Lightly
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY STORY!!!! I simply LOVE the way you write!!!! I simply adore how you manage to put different ideas and sceens and immensely witty humour in your stories!!! I bow before your awesome imagination!!! Many thanks for the good time while reading your wonderful stories!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!! You NEVER disappoint me when I read one of your fics Jelp!!!

Post another soon!
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, you know I did, but I need mooooorrrreeee!!!

Sure everything is settled as far as Sasuke is concerned (selfish as he is,) but what of Naruto??

I suppose I shouldn't complain, because it was so good, but I need more. I want it. I need it. You have me addicted.
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww I'm sad that it's finished. But they have some crazy times together ^_^
person YojiKato
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, why'd he run? This story is very intriguing and exciting, not to mention all kinda of hot.^_^ I can't wait to read more!