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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU DID IT AGAIN! Surprised the hell out of me with such an awesome twist..Wow! *bows in respect* Never would have guessed you would use the nine tails bit in this fiction..so fun..thank you for another great chapter.
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!
This made my day. +^^+
This made my day. +^^+
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jelp,
You're good.
I have to admit, I've read a lot of naruto fanfics that mentions his childhood plight, but never did I came across that stirred emotions inside me. When I was reading the Sasuke's flashback and his nameless Halloween friend, I cannot force back a tear upon reading how the lonely boy stated how "lonely" he was; the way you wrote it was very moving. I have to pause reading the story to take in those upwelling emotions laced within those sentences. And when you had that little boy coming to Sasuke's house, only to be told to leave was the breakpoint; I have to stop Reading the story because the emotions were just too great and I ended up crying.
Please, I'm begging you, keep up those wonderful stories, and I promise I wont hold back the tears.
Tetsujin
You're good.
I have to admit, I've read a lot of naruto fanfics that mentions his childhood plight, but never did I came across that stirred emotions inside me. When I was reading the Sasuke's flashback and his nameless Halloween friend, I cannot force back a tear upon reading how the lonely boy stated how "lonely" he was; the way you wrote it was very moving. I have to pause reading the story to take in those upwelling emotions laced within those sentences. And when you had that little boy coming to Sasuke's house, only to be told to leave was the breakpoint; I have to stop Reading the story because the emotions were just too great and I ended up crying.
Please, I'm begging you, keep up those wonderful stories, and I promise I wont hold back the tears.
Tetsujin
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story so far! I absolutely love an uke Sasuke. Your sex scenes are as hot, raw and passionate as usual. Fantastic work. And oh no! Sasuke discovered Naruto? What's gonna happen?!
Please please update soon ^^
Please please update soon ^^
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has me begging for more at the end of every chapter. I hope we get to read all the details of how Naruto came to be involved in this, and what's going to happen next.
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe you stopped there. I love this so much.
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better...poor 'Suke I wonder what he is in for??? I would have loved to "seen" him in a Marry and her little lamb outfit for Halloween...haha...he would be totally adorable in that
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is awesome!! I can't wait to see what's in store for Sasuke!! That and "Like Ninja Fighters"!
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
o.o yummy. I clicked on this because it looked interesting, and I wasn't wrong. I'm really enjoying this. A lot. XD It's amusing and hot, and you write it very nicely. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work! ^.^
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know damn well I enjoyed this chapter. You make in incredibly hard not to.
Knowing the nature of fairy tales, kitsune fables and myth, I hope this doesn't turn into a Cupid and Psyche story where now that Sasuke has seen his face, Naruto disappears and no longer shows up to work. 'O_O' I don't know if I -uh, I mean Sasuke - could take it!! :(
Keep up the great work!
Knowing the nature of fairy tales, kitsune fables and myth, I hope this doesn't turn into a Cupid and Psyche story where now that Sasuke has seen his face, Naruto disappears and no longer shows up to work. 'O_O' I don't know if I -uh, I mean Sasuke - could take it!! :(
Keep up the great work!