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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Surprise Sasuke! And here you were thinking Naruto didn't have it in him. What have you got to say for yourself now?
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so perfect. I love the intensity of their lovemaking. I just love the difference in Naruto. It seems like the story is going to end soon. That a bit heartbreaking. I really love this story.
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh Joy how spoiled are we that you would not only share one chapter with us but two today, and the 2nd one would be smutty smut....Thanks again!
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that is an evil cliffhanger. I hope sasuke catches Naruto and they talk it out. Otherwise I'm concerned that Naruto will vanish and sasuke will never see him again. Keep up the goodwork. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally digging this situation. I can't wait to see what happens next here; it's so enthralling and it makes me bite my nails because I know even if this ends well, it'll have me gnawing at my nails. Right on.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohoho, how I love a sexy yet submissive Sasu-uke. Great job, can't wait to see the update
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY!!!! its is awesome!!! im soo loving this! i cant wait for chap 3!!!
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter!! And now you've gotten my hopes up that Naruto is a fox demon!! Why do you keep doing this to me?
Also, that poem was incredible. You could market that. Seriously.
Also, that poem was incredible. You could market that. Seriously.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that flashback about the little boy being all lonely made me sniffle. So sad.
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe... actually I was thinking how funny it would have been if Sasuke just finished up his email as Naruto entered the room. Then, what with tech savvy Naruto most likely having his email tied to his cell phone, an alarm would go off on his blackberry.
"Whats that?"
"Oh, just my email alert."
Moment of silence... wide eyes... realization...
"OH SHIT!!" Naruto yells and bolts out of the room. lol
=^^= Keep up the great work!
"Whats that?"
"Oh, just my email alert."
Moment of silence... wide eyes... realization...
"OH SHIT!!" Naruto yells and bolts out of the room. lol
=^^= Keep up the great work!