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for Masked

by Jelp

person Chanii
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love Jelp! You aré my favorite author always! All your stories aré wonderful. My English is not good but I learn moré by reading your writings. I wish you would write a book I would buy it!
person Bluesake
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This looks good. I am looking forward to the update
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, Jelp. Another one???

Everything you write is gold.
Keep up the great work.
person Mija
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh Jelp you are killing me, first an update on After Dark *Gosh I hope I got the name right* is sooo bad at names I tell ya and now this new story??? you are my queeen I tells ya, loving this new one and cant wait for more, love all your fics, would comment on them all and will when I am over this dang flu, have had it for two weeks, its turned into pnemonia but aaaahhh phewie.....go semi cold meds since I cant take the really good stuff cause of other existing medical conditions so just have to tough it out, anyhow love this new one love the last of After Dark and cant wait for more of all your lovely work huggles and smilles Mija.....ok back to bed for me, huggs
person Raholea
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands in glee*
You write some of the steamier smut i like, And this was deliciously and painfully good. I do hope this continues a ways, though if it's short that's ok. ^^ hope updates come soon, and looking forward to the 'unmasking' ...

Cookies for Jelp!!!
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! AMAZING!!!!! i cant wait for chap 2!!! keep it up!!!!
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods...I think I need a drool bucket..no..I KNOW I need one. WOW!
person reality bites
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for more! it sounds so very promising :)
person klh
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. I like how it's Sasuke that's wanting to pursue a relationship. I hope this is going to be only Sasuke's POV.
person lhg
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you./ I was wondering what his relationship to Naruto is.