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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want apologize for taking so long to review this piece of art. I seriously doubt you'd want to read about me going on and on about how wonderful, funny, angsty (in a good way of course), romantic this story is and how easy it is to read, the chapters are not to long (or to short) but still give alle the information and detail needed. See I knew it, you just didn't want to read that did you ;)
There is one minor comment I'd like to make though; There are some spelling mistakes that really had me crying tears from laughter. They might have been typo's or maybe a spelling check gone haywire but I really thought I'd mention them to you.
In chapter 33 Naruto and Ibiki are discussing which tailor to go to for their kimono's and Naruto mentions at one point about Ibiki's meetings with the Dynamo. I think you meant Daimyo, so that little slip really had me thinking that though some friction and tension between Ibiki and the Daimyo could create some sparks, it still wouldn't make the man a Dynamo.
The one that really had me laughing (cause I could actually picture that one in my mind, yeah I know way to much imagination lol) was in chapter 35. This little sentence really had me cracked up completely:
Smirking, the man followed after, dropping his tail into a hamster before stepping into the dimly lit bedroom, finding Naruto already crawling onto the bed.
I really hope you meant dropping his towel in a hamper, because imagining a hamster in the room when they are getting down and dirty would be really disturbingly hilarious.
Please don't think I mean all of this to offend you, but it was just to funny not to say something about it and all in all I still think this story is great.
There is one minor comment I'd like to make though; There are some spelling mistakes that really had me crying tears from laughter. They might have been typo's or maybe a spelling check gone haywire but I really thought I'd mention them to you.
In chapter 33 Naruto and Ibiki are discussing which tailor to go to for their kimono's and Naruto mentions at one point about Ibiki's meetings with the Dynamo. I think you meant Daimyo, so that little slip really had me thinking that though some friction and tension between Ibiki and the Daimyo could create some sparks, it still wouldn't make the man a Dynamo.
The one that really had me laughing (cause I could actually picture that one in my mind, yeah I know way to much imagination lol) was in chapter 35. This little sentence really had me cracked up completely:
Smirking, the man followed after, dropping his tail into a hamster before stepping into the dimly lit bedroom, finding Naruto already crawling onto the bed.
I really hope you meant dropping his towel in a hamper, because imagining a hamster in the room when they are getting down and dirty would be really disturbingly hilarious.
Please don't think I mean all of this to offend you, but it was just to funny not to say something about it and all in all I still think this story is great.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay smut! <3 Thanks for sharing! =)
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that smutt was so hot^^And adorably sweet!!! Thanks for posting!!!
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July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The fighting was awesome and the ending was really cute!!!! Thanks a lot for posting^^ See you again soon!!!!
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July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you tease! So cruel! ~ <3
It must amuse you to know that your reader base must wait at the edge of their seats for two weeks for the much anticipated upcoming chapter; I heartily approve! As always, keep up the good work.
It must amuse you to know that your reader base must wait at the edge of their seats for two weeks for the much anticipated upcoming chapter; I heartily approve! As always, keep up the good work.
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June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Action, humor, drama, romance, ass-kicking...what's not to like? Seriously, I am quite fond of this story and am glad to be able to read more of it. I look forward to when Ibiki gets his hands on the Pretty Pink Psycho and breaks her into little bitty pieces with a twisted little grin <3.
That is, of course, if Danzo doesn't snap and kill Sakura first in a fit of frustration (and sexual aggression).
Old man sex + death by the wrinkly harbinger of imminent sexual nightmares mid coitus = O_o
Oh god, my eyes...where's the brain bleach? Why did I type that ohgodohgodohgod...cannot dislodge horrible thoughts...
That is, of course, if Danzo doesn't snap and kill Sakura first in a fit of frustration (and sexual aggression).
Old man sex + death by the wrinkly harbinger of imminent sexual nightmares mid coitus = O_o
Oh god, my eyes...where's the brain bleach? Why did I type that ohgodohgodohgod...cannot dislodge horrible thoughts...
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May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE this story, can't wait for chapter 32, hope it's soon ^_^
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May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh I think we will be seeing some smutt soon^^I can't wait^^See you again!!!!
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May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love that worshipping voice night used in the end when he discribed the young shinobi. Especially that they are there to destroy root and that they will be their savours^^Is it possible that night is sai? that would be kind of fitting^^I can't wait for more see you agian soon!!!
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April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chappie was really sweet!!! I really like how Naruto knows how to make his friends and lover happy^^ Thanks so much for the update^^ See you again soon!!!!