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by MorningMoon

person SierraM
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was awesome. Especially the last part when they were competing to see who would orgasm first.
person Knigel
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Besides some minor typos, that was pretty good (it's a pretty cool yuri pairing, and that "dual exchange" thing was a pretty clever idea).

And that ending was hilarious (lol, Anko).
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was not bad for a first time. I like the pairing and see as the story was really just for smutt. I like it. I hope you do same more Kairn and Sakura as this site is more boy on boy. So we need same girl on girl here.
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you =), and yeah, just for smut, all my stories will be for that, except maybe two who kinda have a bit of story, but they'll mostly be fun yuri sex. Though, please tell me what sort of stuff i should change/improve ^^;;