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Please wright chapter 4

Hello, been reading "Foreign Affairs" both here and on fanfiction.net. You truly illustrate how political deals like this can be a mixed bags - a few pros (though most of those are for the country/whatever, not the people in the deal itself) and a lot of cons. Still, Temari and Naruto may be luckier than most there - they were already acquintanced with each other, not to mention that Naruto was already before on rather friendly terms with the Sand siblings and most importantly, with Gaara who'll surely (for both his sister and Naruto's sake - and their future children) do everything in his power to ensure that Naruto and Termari will have little to complain about as far as the future goes (well, beyond what complaints they already have, anyway :p ).

Looking forward to see how thing will progress for Temari and Naruto as they try to settle into things as they are now. They seem to be setting in somewhat nicely so far, though, considering your description of the story, I'm sure that the future still holds trouble for the both of them. Looking forward to future updates, whether here or on fanfiction.net!

To hell with angry rabid yaoi-crazed fangirls. The act like their favorite pairing is the only thing possible and everything else is non-canon sacrilege. Delusional, the lot of them!!


I really enjoyed this chapter. It was raw with emotion. This is definitely a very complex situation. Hell, not only do they expect them to marry and have kids, but they also have to stay seperate - not only as a couple but their kids too. Terrible.

Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.

haha. Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

I read this over at FF.net, so I have no need to repeat my reviews to say this is a good story with a good start and build-up for the characters. I'm looking forward to the next *new* chapter you will put out at FF.net. :)

Interesting story. Well written, and I personally like the plot. Keep up the good work.

Priceless. You are sadistic, but I love it. Can't wait for more.

Hey great story start there! I see a lot of potential for a very interesting plotline here!

This sounds like a very interesting story so far and the writing is also very good. I'll definatly try to keep up with this one. Also from what I got out of reading the first chapter you seem to have made the Mizukage a male character. Why is that? I'm just curious about that? If you have followed the manga past chapter 445 you would know that the Mizukage is female.
Any way keep up the good work I look forward to the next chapter.

This is shaping up to be very interesting! Please keep up the good work