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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome story... cant wait to read more... please hurry and update as soon as you can
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great. why did you take it off FanFic?
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
i am really waiting for this story to update!
im really happy that itachi managed to remember about his life and about sasuke, he finally have his memories back.
hmm.. itachi and kakashi? well, its not bad, i think they somehow belong together..:D
i really can't wait for the things sasuke will do in the next chapter, will you insert the scenes in the next chapter the one from the oneshot from before?
please update soon
i am really waiting for this story to update!
im really happy that itachi managed to remember about his life and about sasuke, he finally have his memories back.
hmm.. itachi and kakashi? well, its not bad, i think they somehow belong together..:D
i really can't wait for the things sasuke will do in the next chapter, will you insert the scenes in the next chapter the one from the oneshot from before?
please update soon
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Can't wait for the next!
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Itachi finally got his memory back and I can’t wait until he reunites with Sasuke, hopefully with Kakashi as his new mate… Love the story, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great, your story lines are very original and this one is specially interesting, Please continue with your stories. If you ever need help or support you can contact me. It would be a shame to lose such great imagination and stories. Take care and keep working hard, Its interesting to see as your writing skills improve.
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*grin*
Ooh, how interesting!
I can't wait to see where you take it from here!
*bounces eagerly*
Ooh, how interesting!
I can't wait to see where you take it from here!
*bounces eagerly*
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any idea how much I love your kitteh sasu??
I just wants to huggs him, and squeeze him and loves him
But the bastard would just claw my eyes out*sighs*
I just wants to huggs him, and squeeze him and loves him
But the bastard would just claw my eyes out*sighs*
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, Loved the little bit with Sasuke and Naruto. I truly hope Naruto is more than Human, fox like hopefully. Loved the chapter, I hope you update soon. Thanks again.
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story! One little note though... You used the word descent several times during the pack meeting. The way you were using the word suggests that rifts were being caused amongst the pack members. If that was what you were trying to say then the correct spelling of the word would be dissent. Descent is the past tense of descend or what you would call a downward path (as in "Jason looked down the descent of the mountain with caution."). Dissent is the breakdown of unity in a group (as in "One dissenting voice spoke against the angry mob.")
Sorry for the english lesson. If you were attempting to suggest that the pack was going downward (in intelligence, compassion...etc.) then disregard my above babbling and chalk it up to me being slow and just not getting what you were going for. Once again... loving it and hope you update soon!
Sorry for the english lesson. If you were attempting to suggest that the pack was going downward (in intelligence, compassion...etc.) then disregard my above babbling and chalk it up to me being slow and just not getting what you were going for. Once again... loving it and hope you update soon!