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for He Don't Want A Man

by Camui

person YojiKato
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally HOT smut!! I felt really bad for Naruto, though, that it was all a dream. But it ended with them dancing so maybe one day it can turn into something more. ^_^ Yeah, I hate straight up romance, but always want the couple together in the end... Maybe I'm a closet romantic. *shrugs* Anyhoo, totally loved!! I didn't realize you'd written some Naruto stuff or I would have checked it out sooner. ^_^ Keep up the good work. ^_^
person nivell
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sakura as the fat, ugly friend..that made me laugh. The NaruSasu bit was hot!
person inuspike
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was excellent. When it turned out to just be a dream, I actually felt bad for poor Naruto. In retrospect, though, I guess I should really be feeling sorry for Sasuke.

This was a great story, one that I thoroughly enjoyed. You did a marvelous job! ^^