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for Loneliness' Child

by narugal101

person Sam
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg naru seems to alqays attract all the arrogant bastards. Lol plz do continue good sir/madam. XD
person lara5170
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've just discovered this story & finished reading the 7 or so chapters that have been posted. I really enjoyed what I read, but I didn't check to see when it was last updated. I hope it isn't 1 of the many (& I mean 'MANY') stories on here, that have been abandoned.
schedule August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. I can't wait to see Kakashi weasel his way into Naruto's life and run up against Sasuke.
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, can you edit chapter two (or rather chapter one since you start with a prologue)? It's all mushed together making it really hard to read. I want to read it, but it's too difficult. Thanks. Great beginning though, I'm intruiged.
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo good. It's really different and I like it. Kakashi is being a jerk of course and his arrogance is so going to mess things up. I see some eventual groveling in his future lol.
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow Kakashi was really angry but I sympathize to a degree because he doesn't realize what exactly he did to Naruto I guess but also because won't give him a chance to talk to him and explain what's going on in this life/year. Also at the same time, Naruto can't think past his own experience. Hopefully, Iruka will be able to help this situation if he can calm down about Kakashi enough.lol
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooo. I usually stick to traditional naruto pairings but this! This is interesting and I really like it. Hope your muse comes to you and enabled me to read a new chapter.
person smint45
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far!!!! I'm eagerly waiting for more!!!! See you again soon!!!!
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Kakashi's really convinced of his story that he'll find the child. Does he have a sixth sense in this story?
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! I cracked up when Iruka said, ...idiot, he's in the cloud genius.