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November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why is sakura such a bitch here?
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to be updating this story soon? I want to know what will happen. The suspense is killing me. :)
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well this was good i wonder what sakura is going to do now lol thanks
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. Good chapter. ^^
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy, I'm sure the shit would hit the fan now. Sakura can figure obviously that Tenten's new boyfriend is Naruto, and to go lingerie shopping with Tenten will make things worse. Makes me wonder whether Sakura will finally confront Tenten in the store and ask the weapons-wielding kunoichi how she and Naruto gotten together when the last time Sakura remember was that Tenten was with Neji. It will definitely make for an interesting conversation, especially given Sakura is jealous that Naruto didn't wait for her and gone with Tenten.
So I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Tenten would invite Sakura and get the pinkette into a threesome with Naruto. ;)
So I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Tenten would invite Sakura and get the pinkette into a threesome with Naruto. ;)
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. One of my favourite and rarest pairings writtain so interestingly and so well it's got me coming back to re-read it again and again. I can't wait for the next chapter, and hope your working on it? There's not enough NaruxTen, and even less that are just so damned good.
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.
Can't wait till Chapter 2.
Can't wait till Chapter 2.
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was good i would like to see more of this please
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, real nice. Even though I've been away from the realm of fanfiction for almost a year now, I've got to say there's no better way to return than reading a good story, and man! your fic sure hit the right spot. Not only because I love anything with Tenten on it, but also because I really enjoy well-written stories.
Though I believe a Beta could help you improve your grammar and correct those minor mistakes, I think your writing is good and can do without proofreading.
I'll wait anxiously for the next chapter! Keep writing and improving!
Though I believe a Beta could help you improve your grammar and correct those minor mistakes, I think your writing is good and can do without proofreading.
I'll wait anxiously for the next chapter! Keep writing and improving!
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A NaruTen fic that might turn into a NaruTenSaku! I love NaruTen, and I don't mind NaruSaku either. So if this fic can grow to become a threesome I have not ever read in fanfiction before, I'm all for it! :)