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for Deep End

by kongxing

person Shawndra
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I personally enjoyed this fic. There's not enough Naruto/Tenten fics in the world. I did not see many mistakes at all. I never knew Sakura was into voyeurism.

With Much Respect,



The Prince of Madness
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually enjoyed this very much. I love how narrow minded Sakura is; assuming the worst of Tenten just because she does not share the same shallow values that Sakura possesses and the possibility that she might prefer Naruto over someone else becomes unthinkable. Sakura is definitely in for a 180 view change. ^^

Naruto likes to throw out some pretty hefty demands. While he says them half jest, we all know he means them with full sincerity.

Great story. Keep up the good work.