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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fanning the Flames of Conflict! do you honestly think Iruka [the hokage]'s gonna allow one of his very young subjects, let alone two, be removed from his kingdom? especially if one of the infants may be/is his only child? Altercations have started for LESS! 'Tis a battle of wills you have set them to...that is until someone challenges / proves paternity!
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful b-day present to wake up to. I was so happy to see the next chapter up. Please keep them coming I am very addicted to the story.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow .. i hope some one finds in in time and that they do get back together.. please please update soon ... later for now
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keep it up. I hope that Kakashi & Ibiki get back together.
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November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this will kill me if you wait to long, so please update
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October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! things just got kind of complicated
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the original story and the first few chapters of this, but now and i'm sorry to say this but it feels like i'm reading the script from a day time soap. I've come back the last couple of chapters hoping there would be some kind of improvement but there hasnt. the last couple of chapters though it may not have been your intention feel as though they have been rushed.
a fanfic that feels rushed to a reader like myself makes me think that the writter is seeing the fic as something they just need to update on a regular basis just to keep the views up. I hope this isnt coming off as flaming or anything but i really loved the first story and i was loving this.
I hope you can look back on what is being done now and write with the same passion i felt from the words of the original work, i just cant seem to feel the same passion as there was, i'm sorry
a fanfic that feels rushed to a reader like myself makes me think that the writter is seeing the fic as something they just need to update on a regular basis just to keep the views up. I hope this isnt coming off as flaming or anything but i really loved the first story and i was loving this.
I hope you can look back on what is being done now and write with the same passion i felt from the words of the original work, i just cant seem to feel the same passion as there was, i'm sorry
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August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At this point I kind of want to take almost every couple and just knock their heads together. Honestly, seems every pair keeps missing each other at the intersection. The only couples that seems okay are Gai and Hinata, and Shino and Inoichi. I'd like to see how they're doing in the midst of all the chaos. Still another gripping chapter. Looking forward to the next.
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH!! Kakashi ideot! GOD! now everything has came back to 0 again. it's going to be hard for Ibiki to convince him that he didn't have anything with anyone.
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol Jiji is the blushing bride XD