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for Fanning the Flames

by sesshabattousai

schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM

I haven't been feeling all that well, but once january rolls around I am hoping to get my artistic muse back.
So sorry friend.

This sequel however is just as delicious as the previous story.
Lots of detail and a great capture of each character's personality.
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Kashi actually said 'to hell with icha icha' is the world going to end? o.O
That was so sexy and well written, when you write abouat these too it's like you capture their every emotion ^_^
I actually forgot about Gai's sensitivity class rofl.
Keep up the awesome work :)
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow Chouza is a bit angry >.> He really needs an attitude adjustment. Is that all that's bothering kashi? I hope it's not the meds that causing this. Or it could be repressed emotions. I look forward to the next installment of the journey. It's gone way beyond a fic. We can turn this into a sitcom ^_^ lol 'A day in the life of Hatake Kakashi' rofl
person LadyWolf
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait for the next chapter. I find this pairing in this fic very interesting. I feel sad that Kakashi has so much self hatred.... and that Chouza on the coucil needs to shut his fat MOUTH!!!

Post another soon!
person luvsjazz
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me. Your stories are like crack.....I was checking every day to see if there were updates to Into the Fire, and now the sequel is here already? I'm speechless, not only at the quality, but the quantity. --you know if you've got the whole thing writen already, we woudn't mind having it all posted at once--- ;)

Can't wait to see what happens with Kisame and the kid and the council and Iruka....
If I had one complaint about things that have gone on so far, it would be the foursome. I can see that as twisted as Kakashi has been in this story that he would offer the foursome and do it for Ibiki, but I can't see Ibiki risking it knowing Kakashi's history. That being said, considering how much detail you've put into everything else that's gone on so far, I hope the consequences of that night (weekend?) aren't just glossed over.

Now I'm going to go to sleep and hope there's a present of a new chapter when I wake up :)
person LadyWolf
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw shit! here we go again!!!
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great start to the sequel of my favourite Naruto-verse fanfic! Thank you for continuing the story of my favourite couple - I can't wait to read about Kakashi and Ibiki dealing with parenthood.
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Hoo! the highly anticipated sequel! can't help it, i'm a sucker for sequels.

awesome beginning! so hot! guess iruka get to taste kashi next!

can't wait for chapter two!

excellent as always!
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more ^_^ They sure had alot of fun, I'm so jealous.