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for Twisted Soul

by Hellium2606

person meh
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, over so soon?
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That is just amazing. I don't think I've read anything this relentlessly perveted since nise dragon blood. Please update, the world needs more of this beutiful smut
person 2CRsgt
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The man Haruno is a wack job but that dosen't mean I can't enjoy the story between Satura and Naturo.
person 2CRsgt
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that WAS different. What is needed is more sex but MUCH LESS ANEL SEX! Otherwise write more.
person 2CRsgt
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story so far, I wonder if Hinata with her "all seeing eyes" would have seen any of this and would she want to play? Maybe Ayame could the extra money "babysitting". I still think that sooner or later Ino will want to see whats "up".
person baronobeefdip
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is going to be an intrasting storie i can already tell that i really want to see how it turns out. aside from a few spelling errors i would say this story is perfect the right length in chapters not to long not to short and very creative to say the least all in all i salute oh master of fetishes
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awsome great story hope you do add more girls i really like this so far
person wind797
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well that was another good chapter the only thing i don't like about it s the poopplay
person wind797
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was interesting i hope to see more
person KaelHyun
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vary interesting I hope to see more as partly because you defenatly have something here and partly because theres to much Yaoi. Also I know you don't have it down as M/F/F or maybe not planed but are you thinking of adding Ino to this?