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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. At first I thought it will be packed with sex, but I am glad you didn't made it so. I am surprised you used their surname and not first name for the tattoos, but I really enjoyed to read about the scar process - it was interesting and somewhat fit Itachis pedant nature (which I think he has).
I think it is good as it is - there is room for the reader to imagine what will happen after. And even for that isn't a need, I guess.
Thank you for sharing with us.
I think it is good as it is - there is room for the reader to imagine what will happen after. And even for that isn't a need, I guess.
Thank you for sharing with us.
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Good and very Believable.