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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Totally loved it!
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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is simply amazing. I think it deserves more love! Have you ever tried to post your stories at fanfiction.net? <=)
It was really sad to read about Itachi's ignorance and rudeness in first part. Although it's so acceptable and realistic, with Sasuke being his first love, and Itachi's dominant nature. People often forgets that characters aren't empaths/telepaths, and can't read thoughts and feelings of each other like open book.
End of the part 1 was incredible, with all Sasuke's emotions flowing out and Itachi's understanding. You sure know how to make catchy cliffhanger! 8D
Part 2. I'm so love it, love you for writing it, and love your Itachi for making himself think about things and change himself! (and so fast! It clearly shows just how deeply he cares about his brother on the inside) And writing style seems slightly different... more warm and kind, I think. Maybe it's just me, but anyway, thank you so much! I love the way this story makes me feel. 8D
And all this misunderstandings, wishes to make another be happy... loneliness and sadness, love and tenderness, they seeps out of the text right into the heart. The way you write is amazing.
And I so love the way you portrayed Naruto! He is so observant and wise on people's emotions. =)
And all (all!) erotic scenes are breathtaking. Can't find the right words... *loveloveloveloveloveloveLOVE. Love them!*
For now, brothers's interaction in the shower is my favorite. 8D
(Itachi's first tiiiime... okay, I must stop thinking about it. Must... stop...)
8D
I really look forward for this story's update! (Will we read how brothers started their relationship in your plot? Will Madara be cruel and unaccepting? Will we see more brotherly moments between the two? Questionsss 8D )
*send waves of warmth*
<3
It was really sad to read about Itachi's ignorance and rudeness in first part. Although it's so acceptable and realistic, with Sasuke being his first love, and Itachi's dominant nature. People often forgets that characters aren't empaths/telepaths, and can't read thoughts and feelings of each other like open book.
End of the part 1 was incredible, with all Sasuke's emotions flowing out and Itachi's understanding. You sure know how to make catchy cliffhanger! 8D
Part 2. I'm so love it, love you for writing it, and love your Itachi for making himself think about things and change himself! (and so fast! It clearly shows just how deeply he cares about his brother on the inside) And writing style seems slightly different... more warm and kind, I think. Maybe it's just me, but anyway, thank you so much! I love the way this story makes me feel. 8D
And all this misunderstandings, wishes to make another be happy... loneliness and sadness, love and tenderness, they seeps out of the text right into the heart. The way you write is amazing.
And I so love the way you portrayed Naruto! He is so observant and wise on people's emotions. =)
And all (all!) erotic scenes are breathtaking. Can't find the right words... *loveloveloveloveloveloveLOVE. Love them!*
For now, brothers's interaction in the shower is my favorite. 8D
(Itachi's first tiiiime... okay, I must stop thinking about it. Must... stop...)
8D
I really look forward for this story's update! (Will we read how brothers started their relationship in your plot? Will Madara be cruel and unaccepting? Will we see more brotherly moments between the two? Questionsss 8D )
*send waves of warmth*
<3
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg poor tachi lol i hope uncle madara dnt take away sasgay XD ^_^ cant wait to see what happens next update soon ^_^
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July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, I think you should write some more ^^ I would like to know how Itachi handles the situation.
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June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Itachi better think of something to get Sasuke back or he'll loose Sasu forever!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should continue. The story is great so far and it would suck for it to just end like that. Great job.
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue this story!!!! I want to see what Itachi will do to keep Sasuke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It can't just end like that! I don't think Itachi would let it btw.... enyhow seriously like i so far. ^^
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This...was amazing. I am proud of Sasuke. Itachi *shakes fist* I wanted to punch him in the face. Did he really think that Sasuke would just put up with that forever? So, his heart is broken...I don't think I care. (wow...But really I like Itachi so much more than Sasuke) Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter. *gives candy* ^^