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Ah, the budding emotions of troubled adolescents makes for such a wonderful story. ^^ I think I liked this chapter the most so far; it was well written and executed. I like the way you're having the boys progress with their "feelings" (going from instant gratification to something a bit deeper). I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two.

Aww. I think my favorite part of this story (both chapters) is Naruto coming to the realization that he actually has a friend in the world. Not only is Kiba willing to spend time with him, he also treats him nicely. I think this new found bond Naruto has with Kiba will probably shake up the way he looks at things. He openly admits that the reason he like Sakura, other than her cuteness, was that she would be occasionally nice to him when nobody was looking. Kiba's already proven himself 5x the friend she's been.

What started out as a silly little one shot has developed into something much more substantial. Keep up the great work.

i read this a day and a half ago at a new years party, and had to leave a review once i got back home. kiba and naruto are my favourite pairing, and this is wonderfully well written. They seem so awkward and timid about it at first, which i find both cute, and funny, and the second chapter kiba's confidence and cocksure nature was so entertaining. i really look forward to reading more, though i wish the chapters were a little longer, they felt too short for my own tastes.

You NEED to keep this going! I love this couple but there aren't very many fics with them together! Love it! I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.

Wow, you updated. Cool.

Keep this going, please. It's really very good.

Cute. Nice feeling of 'first time' & 'being naughty but excited'.

Nice. ^^

This was a pretty interesting little story.
Keep up the good work.