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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I find these little rspe scenes kinda erotic. Am I sick?lol. Too bad Itachi's in this all messed up, I hope he gets better toward the end of the fic. I can't wait to read when Naruto finally finds out why he'd been kidnapped or how their relationship evolves. I really love this story! Thank you for creating this type of fic.^^
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.... what's gunna happen next?? And, is this a repost? It feels like it might be a repost.
Oh, and Naruto would be a masochist, not a sadist. Sasuke is the sadist in this... for lack of a better word, relationship.
Oh, and Naruto would be a masochist, not a sadist. Sasuke is the sadist in this... for lack of a better word, relationship.
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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear, Brittany
the smut was supposed to be like that. Because it's non con It's not supposed to be pages long Sorry I don't like pages of rape though this story is Stockholm syndrome you may like rape I don't know, but I can't write it out. Also it has it this soon because as I said it's a non con fic thats the reason why he took Naruto. As for punctuation well If my beta doesn't catch it then I really don't know what to say. I'm sure I put up comments asking nicely to keep any issues about such things from the review. So lets see thank you for that, I don't see the point in the review if you don't like it then click out of it instead of finishing? I'm so not trying to be rude or mean. But I do try my hardest with my work, and I'm not well taken to anything bad about it or towards sephy who beta's for me.
the smut was supposed to be like that. Because it's non con It's not supposed to be pages long Sorry I don't like pages of rape though this story is Stockholm syndrome you may like rape I don't know, but I can't write it out. Also it has it this soon because as I said it's a non con fic thats the reason why he took Naruto. As for punctuation well If my beta doesn't catch it then I really don't know what to say. I'm sure I put up comments asking nicely to keep any issues about such things from the review. So lets see thank you for that, I don't see the point in the review if you don't like it then click out of it instead of finishing? I'm so not trying to be rude or mean. But I do try my hardest with my work, and I'm not well taken to anything bad about it or towards sephy who beta's for me.
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well... Sorry to sayy... But, You have bad punctuation and that was a really rushed and horrible smut...
Just saying the truth hun :/
Maybe you should slooow down a bit, because a rushed story to get to the smut, that was also rushed, is just not good.
Just saying the truth hun :/
Maybe you should slooow down a bit, because a rushed story to get to the smut, that was also rushed, is just not good.
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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
'Please sir, may I have some more?'
I love it. It was really fun to read and Sasuke ignoring Naruto is so typical. Especially since he doesn't stop talking (gag lol). And Naruto requesting things from the Sasuke is very funny. I hope the tables turn at least once and Naruto gets his way (perhaps a punishment later too) from Sasuke.
Can't wait for the next chapter cheers~!
I love it. It was really fun to read and Sasuke ignoring Naruto is so typical. Especially since he doesn't stop talking (gag lol). And Naruto requesting things from the Sasuke is very funny. I hope the tables turn at least once and Naruto gets his way (perhaps a punishment later too) from Sasuke.
Can't wait for the next chapter cheers~!
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July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow where will youtake this?
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
hmmm..interesting so sasuke had been stalking naruto for quite some time.. great! XD so sasuke really plan for the whole thing guess so
and his really interested with naruto i can't wait for the next chapter
please update soon!
hmmm..interesting so sasuke had been stalking naruto for quite some time.. great! XD so sasuke really plan for the whole thing guess so
and his really interested with naruto i can't wait for the next chapter
please update soon!
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I miss this fic So Much!! I hope you update soooon! PLEEAASSE!!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
my gosh! i like it!!!
please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh,I hope there will be more,it's very interesting...