AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Move Down To Me, Slip Into You

by MagicalReality

person Nataliya
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oheemmgee!!1 That was great! Please update soon =D!! I can't wait for the next chapter <3!
person Timberwolfdsk713@yahoo.com
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Read chap. 4 update

I really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!
person tovah
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More Please, I am begging you! I think this is so hot.
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto needs to go nine-tails on his stubborn ass. Then we'll hear some real begging.
person Samric
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-Sighs dreamily- I love NaruSasu. And I love how you've moved this from mindless smut to what will hopefully be much MUCH more.
person masako
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story. i am all for the smut because it is all very hot and sexy, but the character development is also very well done. i am sitting on the edge of my seat...i really want to know what happens next. Happy Writing!!!
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story- I'm not really into NaruSasu, I prefer Sasuke!seme, but I really like this story. I hope there will be a new update soon.Ja!
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Erotic!Hot!Sexy!Steamy! Oh, My GOSH...mind blowing...lol :) Ok my mind is mush and can't think let alone type.....Begging on my knees for the next chapter!! TOTALLY WICKED GRIN!!
person Sylvir
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
your second chapter is missing. The only thing there is your author notes. Please fix.
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!-He he Sasuke is a little closet pervert-are you going to continue this story?