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for Spirits Within

by Daydreamer79

schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! You were right. I cried like a lil babe! That was such a great short story. :D
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm heartless... But I liked it anyway ;)
person smint45
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That story was absoloutly fantastic!!! But so sad!!! I cried my eyes out in the end!!!! But I'm so happy for them!!! Now after 50 years they can finally be together!!!! This is one of the best stories I've ever read!!!! I totally loved it!!! I admire their love, how they could go on with only one night a year for 50 years!!!! I'm so glad you shared this story with us!!!! See you again!!!!
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was a fantastic story. love conquers all, even death.
person Bunnybop05
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was beautigul..and sad it pulled at my heart..
person noit
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is soo sweet.
person noezel7
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn you!! I can't believe you got me to cry!! Great job as always. It was nice to see that not everything ended exactly happily ever affter, but they did end sorta happy. I can't wait to read your next story!!
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know he didn't die 'alone' but it's sad that nobody else was there :/ But I'm happay that they would finally be together. I like how he died ^_^
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmmeeeewwwwwwww!!!! *sobs* that was simply lovely. Could have been even harder on the heartstrings but it was good just the way it is. thank you for sharing this lovely story with us.
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a beautiful ending!
I almost cried though..
Anyways, that was an amazing story!