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by butcherboy

schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story it made me laugh out loud. I feel sorry for Naruto, Sasuke is being so mean to him.
person Dragon7
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!!!! I love how socially acquired Sasuke is keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok. i thought it was .... GREAT. i initially wasn't sure about the writing style but i love that they are both a little manic and that we get some insight into that teenage mania.

awesome. and i look foward to more chapters..long or short =P
person Charm and Strange
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My theory so far: Sakura did a henge as Naruto to get close to Sasuke, because there is NO WAY cannon Naruto would act like that. The hair thing is definitely a girl's habit, for one.
person Charm and Strange
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, my theory is obviously false...so I have no idea what was going on in with them in this chapter. Just a tad OOC, in my opinion...
person Rara
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually, really like your story. Its interesting and cutes in its own way and I like that! Thing is, sometimes it could be a little confusing on what your writing you know? Or maybe its just me. I don't know! I still think the stories great and the last chapter was goods! I feel so bad for Sasuke...he has no idea does he what he did wrong. XD. Can't wait! Keep up the good work!
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, seriously. Keep up the good work! It's Sasuke who is a weirdo, not the blonde. And Ulysses- priceless. I can imagine Sasuke being the type to read that book...
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well if this isnt a disaster i dunno what is. cant believe he was half hr late though i KNEW he was wearing the pink shirt lol I also feel sas ran out without his wallet.. boy i hope not for his sake but i sense it coming. Naruto at the end though, im so lost. what was that empty stare thing about?? sup i'll find out
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You've captured my attention. I'll be waiting for new updates eagerly.

Xander
person Dorkchic
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure if I like the two options with which I was presented. Instead of singing praises to heaven or wishing your untimely demise- I will say that I am liking this story thus far and hope you update soon. Just to be clear... you cannot update if you have shuffled loose the mortal coil- so don't die. LOL!