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for Finding it Out

by butcherboy

schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's damn good, you should continue, I laughed my ass off as I read the chapter (in a good way, of course...:3)
person Dorkchic
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Oh lord that is funny! I love spontaneous uncontrollable word vomit- especially when it is something that you would never say otherwise. So the question is... Does Sasuke have a butt fetish or does he merely have the hots for Naruto? I am voting on the second, because he would have noticed someone else's butt by now if it were the first option. I mean really- Lee was in the showers wasn't he? And with the amount of exercising he does you know that ass must be smokin'!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha that was hilarious! I love it! please continue, I wanna know what Naruto thinks about the whole situation (or Sasuke's ass)! oh, and btw - ulta as in ultrasound refers to the wave length, not the strength (how loud it is). :)
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! (and I usually HATE Sasuke). I need more... NOW!
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude, what the hell?
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but I just don't get why Sasuke screamed.. that's what I think throws it off. So I have to agree with Prism0467 Looking foward to an update though. so don't giveup, keep it up.