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I liked the angry kiss... and that Sasuke didn't plan it he just can't seem to help it. And so want him to disentangle himself from Karin even though I know that isn't going to happen anytime soom. I like how we're getting to see all this through Sasuke now!

whoo hoo... watch the tape... lots... be obsessed with the tape... yeah lol

I so love this story and I don't care if it's only half a chapter... I'll take whatever crumbs you're offering! I'm just so happy that you haven't given up on it. It's one of the best stories I've ever read... the big problem of their ages, the beginning lies, the fiance, Sasuke's father, Naruto's friends and family... all of that I still barely think of because I just get caught up in their emotions. They are just so majorly focused on each other... almost obsessed... and they just need to be with each other because they just can't let go. I love that intense focus.

It's like with canon Naruto and Sasuke... no matter what else is going on... they keep coming back to being focused on each other.

ohhhhh!!! I was so glad to see a new chapter up!!!!!!! but more.... I want lots more!!!! I totally love this story and I'm excited that it's now Sasuke's side that we get to see. It's like you have all of the obsessive... possessive... this person means the most... feeling I think goes with these two and I love reading this story. More soon I hope!!!

this is kind of sad but i do like the story line so hears hoping!

Wow...that just made what he did with/to Naruto even that much worse. Sasuke knew all along everything that was hanging over his head. Everything that he wasnt willing to let go of at all. Knew that naruto was young and a virgin and then found out that he was underage and then STILL did all of this. Revealing what he was fealing just makes him seem like that much more of a selfish bastard not much else. The pressure that he was under is self made pressure. pressure that he could walk away from. The pain that he CAUSED naruto was all because he wanted to run away from HIS problems for a little while. Did he not care about what he was doing to this boy? Doesnt look like it.

It will be really interresting to see how everything plays out. I cant see how naruto would ever forgive him for this. And that naruto would do a complete 180 with Kiba, who was being such a horrible friend, I dont know anyone in the real world who would forgive so easily with what kiba had done and said to him. that seemed kinda strange. after a couple of attempts maybe but just like a, dont worry about man, im over it, kind of thing was weird.

everyone knew that sasuke was engaged but noone actually told Naruto this. They just tried to keep him from sasuke but they never actually told him the one thing that actually made him want to leave sasuke alone. that was mind blowing to me. Why wouldnt Iruka and kakashi just come out with that right out the gate? i would have that would have been their number one ammunition besides the fact that naruto was underage.

I'am really glad I took the time out of my day to read what you have so far of this story, I enjoyed it very much, I can't wait to see what Sasuke's going to do about his engagement to karin, and how he is going to handle telling his father he may be gay, and how he is going to deal with kakashi in the future. I really liked how you wrote Naruto's pov, for the first 8 chapters, I feel like naruto needs to be single for awhile , to figure out what it is exactly that he wants, and to possibly if he goes out with Sasuke again. Go on a real date, where they go to dinner and talk about their likes and dislikes, cuz I kinda feel like their relationship so far has only been physical, and naruto thinks he's in love with Sasuke, when he doesn't know everything about him and he doesnt spend every waking minute with him, so that part left me confused. I would recommend getting a beta reader, their were quite a few mistakes here and there , I understood what you were trying go say, but I think it could help you in the long run to get a beta reader.... Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next. :))

omgosh that was sexy. I love Sasuke's POV. be inspired to write lots more! Can't wait to see how he changes to being willing to throw everything out for Naruto :)

please continue! This is SUCH a great story, and I love it so much!

Please pleease keep updating <3