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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 2
I was like so worried Sasuke would never speak to him again.....happy to see he had to give in to temptation!! LOL I did love the show of parental support by Kakashi and Iruka....the way they behaved showed that they care about him enough to set limits and actually give him the correction he needs. Even if he doesn't listen they are still showing him how important he is to them and that they don't plan to give up on him. SWEET
I was like so worried Sasuke would never speak to him again.....happy to see he had to give in to temptation!! LOL I did love the show of parental support by Kakashi and Iruka....the way they behaved showed that they care about him enough to set limits and actually give him the correction he needs. Even if he doesn't listen they are still showing him how important he is to them and that they don't plan to give up on him. SWEET
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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 3
This is so intense and the suspense is killing me!! This is complete torture!! This story has so much sex appeal that it just screams STEAMY and should warn SHORTNESS OF BREATH if you read this!! LOL This is just so YUMMY!!! LOVE IT!!! Its better then CHOCOLATE!!! Much SWEETER TOO!!!
This is so intense and the suspense is killing me!! This is complete torture!! This story has so much sex appeal that it just screams STEAMY and should warn SHORTNESS OF BREATH if you read this!! LOL This is just so YUMMY!!! LOVE IT!!! Its better then CHOCOLATE!!! Much SWEETER TOO!!!
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is going so good!! i want to know what's up also!! man, it's so sad sasuke has to go away T_T
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that there is going to be a lot of chapters to this story, just as long as if they stay just as thrilling as the first three. I am so excited to see what happens. I was so happy also that Itachi-san came into the fic, he is my sexy wet-dream man. ^-^ I love your story so much many hugs.
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooh cliffy....so are they yakuza where did fugaku send sasuke is naruto in danger? what do kakashi and iruka know...so many questions hope you update this soon
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
with out the knowledge of whats going on it didnt seem like a good idea to tell kakashi about who picked up sasuke especially when he disapeared with the phone into the other room.ahh...their sinful blissful relationship smashed by kakashi surprised naruto doesnt seem angry.a few months huh,hope things do calm down by then but i guess since itachis in the mix now things should go as planned without sasuke going to jail for something clearly illegal.age aint nothin but a number~ hope you can update soon
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just one question: you said in the first chapter when Naruto first slept with Sasuke that he was a virgin but in this chapter you made it sound like he'd slept with 3 other guys before him. Which one is it? I apologize but I was getting hung up on the inconsistency.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Looking forward to the next chapter
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Naughty Naruto being jailbait and all. I like this one.
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February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
second last sentence third last word should be "into" and not "inot". other wise pretty damn good fic can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is such a turn-on, I enjoy it greatly. I was so sad to finish chapter two and then see that there were no more chapters after that, I hope that there will be many more sexy and thrilling chapters to come just like these two.