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for soulmates: Sun and Moon

by ambrosius

person Onikage
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O *Blown away* I love this story, it's completely new and awesome. I hope you update soon! Take care!
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweetness! I love that you upadate quick (something I'm TERRIBLE at). Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens between them!
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade.Is.Awesome. And you are amazin' my dear for putting up two chappies!
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naruto will have nine different lovers...? Cool... XD
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ACK! Post the next chapter or I'll kick a puppy... a sad puppy! (i like this story by the way :P)
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit spooky >.> And here I though Tsunade was just a lucky drunk. She's a creepy alcoholic witch ^_^
oooh and *hugs* for having Asuma in this fic XD
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh,this is getting interesting- will there be ItaNaru?I love that pairing...
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very much enjoying this and nicely written. Bit of an age concern crops up in this paragraph though - in Chap 2 it says that Sakura and Naruto have been together for two years, but in this Chap it says he is still only 16??? Not sure about the US, but here in the UK he'd be lucky to have a paper round at 14, not to mention under age issues. Lift the ages a bit, and great story!
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this, you should definitely continue...
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a bad breakup. I hope Sakura gets a heart-attack when Sasu and Naru end up together lol jk
ty for the update ^_^