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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I find you write very... mindfully. Mindfully, but at the same time, naturally. You seem to have a practiced hand and exhibit much authority over your words...
'Easy authority.' (I think that's what I mean to say.)
It's impressive, you know.
'Easy authority.' (I think that's what I mean to say.)
It's impressive, you know.
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January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that's hopeful. no more children pimped out as punishment. danzo really was one sick prick.
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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really glad you're still continuing it. I can't wait to see Danzo overthrown!!! That bastard deserves it!!!! Orochimaru is a great plot twist! I like seeing all the characters in here!
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a fascinating story. Looking forward to how the story unfolds.
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
makes face.
this is what i get for not checking back regular and often. still, xtra chappies to read are always fun.
wow, things are really beginning to move now. I hope their plan works. I always thought Danzo was a sick bastard.
this is what i get for not checking back regular and often. still, xtra chappies to read are always fun.
wow, things are really beginning to move now. I hope their plan works. I always thought Danzo was a sick bastard.
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up with all the chapters in this story. I must confess that I love it so. It is an original and well thought out plot with a moving storyline. I can't wait for future chapters.
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooOOooo Whats wrong with Naruto. Could the other boy be a jinchuriki? Maybe the boy's past history seems to parallel to his own?? Could Konohamaru's loose flirting with Inari have that big of an effect?
Can't wait to find out!
Can't wait to find out!
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story it just keeps getting better and better. hope to see the next chapter sooner^^
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi :)
I really liked how you described both Konohamaru's point of view, and Naruto's thoughts as he witnessed the other two. Well, I liked that, but many other things (such as the "transformation training", which made me laugh but is realistic nonetheless).
I don't really know what I should add, and I have a somewhat hard time putting my thoughts into words, but I just wanted to let you know I am still following your fictions ^^
Thanks alot :)
I really liked how you described both Konohamaru's point of view, and Naruto's thoughts as he witnessed the other two. Well, I liked that, but many other things (such as the "transformation training", which made me laugh but is realistic nonetheless).
I don't really know what I should add, and I have a somewhat hard time putting my thoughts into words, but I just wanted to let you know I am still following your fictions ^^
Thanks alot :)
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Yeah, that he is... its Konohamaru you have to look out for."
Bwahahahahahahaa!
Keep up the good work!
Bwahahahahahahaa!
Keep up the good work!