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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Konohamaru's becoming very Naruto-like. :)
Keep up the good work! (And Happy Easter!)
Keep up the good work! (And Happy Easter!)
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope Konohamaru will be able to change his opinion of kids his own age, although knowing the kind of brat they'll be meeting up with.. lol
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Keep up the good work.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And once again we are graced with a glimpse as to how irresponsible Kakashi was as a sensei.
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Keep up the great work!
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. i liked Naruto's defensiveness about konohamaru.
also I like Jiraiya's horror at the two boy's closeness. I think his point of view wouldn't be so much "I hate all gays" rather than "how can you go gay with so many women around." lol Although his advice to Naruto is understandable precaution. Those two are sooooooo freaking young.
also I like Jiraiya's horror at the two boy's closeness. I think his point of view wouldn't be so much "I hate all gays" rather than "how can you go gay with so many women around." lol Although his advice to Naruto is understandable precaution. Those two are sooooooo freaking young.
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YYYEEEEAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! Go Jiraiya!!!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh rescue now that tastes and sounds so sweet
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think in all this time I've been reading this story I didn't realize that they were all that young. (Additional ick factory, lol. Poor kids.)
I hope Naruto and Konohamaru manage to escape their tracker, although at this stage, it seems unlikely. Here's to hoping they encounter Jiraiya in the next village. Surely he could protect them. (Although knowing him, that could be a big if unless he cared enough to figure out who they really were.)
Keep up the good work!
I hope Naruto and Konohamaru manage to escape their tracker, although at this stage, it seems unlikely. Here's to hoping they encounter Jiraiya in the next village. Surely he could protect them. (Although knowing him, that could be a big if unless he cared enough to figure out who they really were.)
Keep up the good work!
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Naruto when all semi-demonic and Konohamaru doesn't quite know whats going on.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!