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for Changes Has It's Reasons

by BastardOmega

schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HINATA!!!

seriouly though, GREAT AWESOME FANTASTICLY EROTIC STORY!!!!! i loved it, now all i want is for you to continiue this story, give naruto a few more tails in the process and get hinata to kill herself (^_^) LOL
person Takai153
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. The begining was funny. Naruto's quiet, its the end of the world! Hahaha. The lemon was good too. The blood play was a bit much, but I guess they can handle it being demons. It also could've used some anal sex and maybe some kage bunshin for a gangbang. But most of all, WHY DID YOU STOP JUST WHEN ANKO JOINED!?!? -cries in despair-

Keep up the awesome work and please write another fic, or update a current one, as soon as you can!