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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice well written piece. You made this pairing how I would expect them to be, just together because of circumstances and being lonely.
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was interesting that it was Hinata Gaara was pining after, I was of course thinking that the both of them were thinking of Naruto. Also if either of them were thinking of Hinata I just would've thought it was Sasuke since he actually knows her better but I like that it was a little unexpected twist :) I also liked how they were not wanting to feel vulnerable or needing anyone and yet there was something there regardless. They can be a complicated pair and there's definitely an edge to them but the way that you portrayed the characters definitely fit with how you would think of these two.
I love the pairing and there aren't nearly enough of them so this was a great read, hope you do decide to post more of them in the future ^_^ Happy Holidays!
I love the pairing and there aren't nearly enough of them so this was a great read, hope you do decide to post more of them in the future ^_^ Happy Holidays!