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Chapter 13, just stops....I need more. This is too good a storyline to lay unfinished. I love it for all the variations and things in it. Great stuff!

its been a long time since the last time I had the chance and the urge to read again... I'm glad I started with yours. I didn't realize that it had been updated and I must tell you I'm loving this story more and more since I started reading this. Keep it up! :D

Here's another review 'dollar' for you! :-D Just thought I'd let you know I bookmarked your profile. I have *takes a second to look at her bookmarks page* 12 profiles bookmarked. Sounds like a lot, but when you consider how many authors there are on here...

I was so excited to see a new chapter up. This story has so much...story!... to it. I absolutely love it. This was a great chapter. I feel sorry for Sasuke but it's interesting the questions he brought up. It will be interesting to see where this goes.

That was absoutly fantastic!! I loved the confrontation with Naruto and Sasuke. I Hope He finally understands that Naruto only loves Shino. Thank you so much for the update and the small smutty scene !!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!

I'm glad you posted new chapters. i was actually wondering where this fic was...! I really do love this fic with Naruto and Shino. I find them an unlikely pair but it works in this fic..

Great job and please post soon!

That was totally fantastic!!! I really loved that shino didn't take the rough sex the wrong way!!! And Than The confrontation between Sasuke and Naruto!!! I really hope that that will not lead to problems. And than this arrogant Hokage!!! He really think he is better!!! Anruto should really show him what he is capable of!!!! See you again soon!!!

arggg....I wasn't keeping track of what page I was on so when the chapter ended I wasn't readyyyyyyy!!! I wanna' keep readingggggggg!!!!!!(smacks self) ok...sorry...I'll stop whining now. Great job! Keep up the good work! Be inspired! Keep typing! uh... (wait that's pressure...) Thanks for sharing! Hope you'll share lots more... soon. (*to self* no that wasn't nagging...that was encouraging. yeah)

I loved this chapter! Naruto showing another group who he is and a small bit of what he can do is fun. I wonder when those who have met him will see what he is really capable of? Will you have the reactions of the town after they find out that Naruto's clones took care of the bandits for them? That would be cool.

I know Naruto will find someone else in the future who will be able to be with him. I so like that. But I don't want him to leave Shino!!!!!!! :( He does love Shino and Shino loves him. I would be wonderful for Naruto to train the village shinobi and have a happy life. I imagine that after Shino dies then he wouldn't want to stay there anymore though. That would be too painful. I did worry about what would happen after he finds happiness with Shino because we KNOW he will eventually get old and die. So this makes it possible for a happy ending!!!!

*sigh* I love this story.

That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I so love this chappie!!!! And I really like the seer!!! I hope we see her again!!!! And He will have somebody to live forever with!!!! I really hope it will be shino!!!! So please give us a happy end in the end!!!! This loe or the future and grand structures across the ocean somehow sond like our modern time!! WIll there be another timechange??? I so can't wait for more of this story!!!! See you again soon!!!