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for Forever

by FireSnake

person smint45
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I absoloutly totally love this story!!!! It's one of the best I've ever read!!!! And I soooo cant wait for MORE!!!!! I totally love you storyline!!!! It's really something different!!!! I never thought about them losing most of their ninja skills and Naruto having to teach them!!!! I wonder if he meets more people from his past!!!! Tsunade would have been shocked at their lack in medical skills!!!! I can't wait to see what other important skills they have forgotten!!!!! And I so can't wait for Naruto to again prove himself!!! They all seem to underastimate him (like he has always been ^^)!!!! Perhaps the new Hokage will have a little bit more trust in hem when he finishes the mission!!!!! And maybe they can spar some time!!!!! And Naru shino I so love this pairing ^^ *jumps in joy* Although Naruto was an ass in the beginning it is way better now!!! Hope it stays that way!!!! And you really made me happy with saying this will be a very long story!!!! I löove long storys and I'm always sad when one of the storys I love is discontinued or finished!!!! So I can only say I'm eagerly waiting for more!!!! And also update soon!!! See you!!!
PS But please don't strain yourself if you are not feeling well I will patiently wait for any update!!!!
person lermbay
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow... I wish I could be more eloquent in my words to describe this but you've pretty much just short circuited my brain. the depth and attention to detail that you've put into this story is amazing. I will be honest, Im not usually one for death fics but your first chapter was done brilliantly to balance gore with heart wrenching anguish. please continue this. I love were your headed with this and can not wait to be mind blown again. thank you. =]
person LadyWolf
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will there be more??? I'm for some reason addicted to Naru/Shino fics????

Post soon!
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. how very informative. At least this Sasuke is not obsessed with becoming/remaining the best. Naruto is a good teacher.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this. I can't wait to read more.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sage Naruto WINS!
person cynaga
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written~! I enjoyed the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot.

I suck at giving reviews, but I really like this story.

A lot.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
one of the hardest things to do is to let go no matter how much you love someone soemthimes the only thing to do is let go i hope this new Shino can understand that