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Chapter 75 what I'm about to say I am saying as someone who has enjoyed your writing. This chapter was terrible. It jumped around chaotically and I felt as if parts were missing. To be honest I think you tried to fit three or four chapters worth of material into one to the detriment of the story.

Alright! Hinata and Neji finally reunite! I'm happy that that is out of the way now (at least I hope).

THat Klennethon Darrent guy is some character. He does like to keep Uchiha on their toes, doesn't he?

And Itachi has been given the okay to be...Itachi. I hope this works.

Hinata was wonderful and it was fun to read her. I like how your bring the characters original Kishimoto personality traits to the different universe.

wonderful chapter once again.

i loved the way hinata promised to help protect neji, and that we got to hear a bit more back story about neji's past. that bastard kd just can't keep from being meddlesome and trying to break up neji and shika. as if shika would ever leave uchiha to be with him!!!

i have to admit i thought you were going to use shadow clones for feeding the babies, but picturing sasuke using some type of teat contraption is so much funnier.

i can't wait to hear about babies climbing all over kisame and some how i don't think uncle itachi is going to be left out of the play time. i think kisame will rope him into playing with the kids especially his little niece that will look so much like sasuke's mother....that could be his redemption.

OMG! I simply loved it:) You covered alot!! That why you're the cats meow:) The therapist was a dick. By Sasukes standards I cracked up at that. Well they called it that Klennethon Darrent would tell the old school Hyuga about Neji. Thank goodness that all worked out. The birth anniversary day is such a cute idea:) Of course the best for me was Sasuke idea of the 'mama feeder' and he can sew it together! That was brilliant and sweet and loving and I love how those two love each other! I got the fluffy-soft Naruto with that plan:) I didn't realize the desk was so scary?! But good it's put away:) I want Itachi to feel welcome in the family:) Ok I'm loving Sasuke even more when he says I have eight sons and a daughter:) You blew me away with this chapter! Awesome ^_^

Woman, this is the best story that I am reading right now and I must say you have a great mind. I am sooooo glad that I found you here and I can't wait till another update. One of these days I will sign in under my real name, but today I was lazy and just had to get this out there. Thank you soo much for doing this fanfiction and I'm sorry I don't review enough. I really do enjoy this story. Thanks

ja ne till next time

Chapter 66 the fight scene in this chapter was again all right, but it didn't get my blood flowing or anything like that. Its most notable in these action scenes where your lack of description of the ship comes through. The shifting points of view was informative, but might have added to the lack of drama. Not sure if it would've been better to pick one person to focus on or not. The part where Kisame was manhandling the intruders was the height of the chapter for me.

Chapter 69 the conflict between Naruto and Sasuke or at least Naruto anger towards Sasuke was nice to see. So often your characters act so coldly logical that they almost seem completely detached from their emotions. As I look back I can only think of a handful of really strong emotions that came out to affect the characters interactions with each other up to this point. Conflict is good. By the way I can completely sympathize with the chapter thing. Whenever I finish one I always feel the need to post it then and there and it's hard to resist that temptation.

Chapter 70 you know males are capable of going without sex for long periods of time. Sorry personal baggage again and I'll try to avoid that in the future. Anyway I liked this chapter with the jumping around and catching up on everyone. Trying to figure out if days or weeks are passing however. If you haven't already done it maybe you should just drop hints about ages because the last dozen or so chapters felt like they are happening very close to each other whereas I felt maybe two or three weeks passed by in this one. How far am I off?

more.. that's all I can say. I want to read more, I want to see where you'll take the story in terms of Kabuto, Orochimaru, Klenneth, Kimimaru...ummm How the kits and kids will grow and learn together, the development of the new Uchiha, Itachi and Haku's "relationship" will we see a return of Zabuza...like wow...honestly, a real great story here