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FINALLY!!! I was aching for some 'foxknotinSasuke' action. While I like how you're developing the other characters I would like to see more of just Naruto and Sasuke as they are the reason why I'm reading this (cause it's under their category). Just my opinion I guess.

Awesome chapter!

In Chapter 63 where ever you meant to spell Kotetsu it came out as Koteusu. Anyway more off seen action which was kind of disappointing. I'm assuming that the extermination of the one particular group is going to eventually have consequences?

Chapter 64 I'm a little disappointed in your first rule while I might be able to help you out with the fourth one. Anyway as for the mature seen in this chapter I give it an eight. No technical flaws which is always good with more detail than usual for you.

I've sort of been looking forward to chapter 62 largely because of its title and I have to say I like his introduction. This is just my personal view, but I thought there was a lot more to be said about him and in a way I feel a bit cheated. Although his introduction was good I felt you started to simply state things about him instead of showing. However the fact he seems to develop some affection for Konohamaru though was nice to see. It's an unusual couple in canon for the obvious reasons, but they do sort of click ones to writing them, right?

WHAT DO YOU MEAN IF WE WANT THE STORY TO CONTINUE~!?

Sorry for shouting but with 600 reviews and 570 ratings, is there any doubt at all?

OMG OMG OMG Naruto with Sasuke in missionary position is so LOVELY.


any thoughts about making a pdf available (justa sking).

Wow! This was major! Kiba gets to stay, not that there was ever the possibility that he would not, and Sasuke and Naruto evolve a little more into the parents they want to become. It's so sweet!

And yes, I would like to see this tale come to some conclusion. I recognize that you have put a great deal of effort into this. I think I speak for many when I state that it is greatly appreciated. You have taken us out of our world and into another.

Hey, and if Kishimoto-sama can pull a time-skip, then why not? ^_^

I'm all for you doing the time skip, but only if you resolve the issue of Itachi. In my opinion he still needs to come full circle and be made a part of the new Uchiha. I really like the idea of KD or the collector and him together, he can provide the intellectual stimulation of Shikamaru and the beauty he craves so much in Naruto and Sasuke. Itachi needs someone to show him he is a treasure and I think the collector can woe him and make him feel valued and not like some tainted person who has to be tolarated.

I'm excited to see what a time skip will bring will Iruka and Kashi have thier own babies? Neji and Shika? Anko and Shino? What will happen with Tayuya Kono-kun Inari, will Sumaru become a champion of one of the crews, like Kisame and Naruto? So many possibilities I'm excited to see it all come together.

Hubba hubba. The lemon scene made me drool. Thank you for that!

WoW wOw WoW!! I was almost ready to cry. I knew Naruto was already upset but when they said all that stuff about the kits. My heart sunk. I think this proves that they are a real family:) Figuring out what had happen and fixing it with everyones help. Then the icing was the alone time together. Hey my next boyfriend will definitely have to howl:) That was so sexy! Sasuke is a fine leader he could have been pissed but instead he knew what Kiba needed to hear and handle it beautifuly. Gaara the sweetie will he understand soon?!:) I look forward to what you have in store after the time lapse! You are the Queen of Naruto space travel and I'm loving the journey ^_^

“He wants to dock his ship to meet with to me,” Sasuke told him.
A very odd misspelling where you put one word that doesn't need to be there towards the end of the chapter. Not sure if I should bother pointing these things out or not?