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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous! I loved what maded Naruto day Haku tears over the Kimono:) Klennethon Darrent still makes my skin crawl. But what Neji said makes sense he's lonely. He watchs everything and is still lonely, the creep:) I really enjoyed! You covered alot with getting everything ready in their quarters and the dinner. Thank you for the treat this weekend:) Yea Baby!! ^_^
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know you say these recent chaptersare rushed, but they still cacrumpetme across brilliantly anyways so i wouldnt stress out too much about it.
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay they're home!! Can I just tell you how much I love KisameHaku and Itachi together..oh yeah I've said that before...lol.
I was worried when Haku brought up the subject of emotionally retarded Sasuke....hope Itachi doesn't have too much trouble facing that truth....but he'll have Kisame and Haku to help him overcome it, and hopefully his little brother too. How great that the new Uchiha are beginning to see how much they would lose if they had killed Itachi, he is such a great asset and I think he will eventually redeem himself. I really want to see you work the becoming and uncle angle....maybe that will even make him seem more human.
I'm glad that Kimimaro is leaving, I did not like the way he developed for this story. He was too cold and not worthy of Gaara or of the new Uchiha. I hope the people in Tarrasade will not be brutal towards Itachi, they need to hear Sasuke explain his decision to let his brother live.
Anyway looking forward to more thanks for the short update
I was worried when Haku brought up the subject of emotionally retarded Sasuke....hope Itachi doesn't have too much trouble facing that truth....but he'll have Kisame and Haku to help him overcome it, and hopefully his little brother too. How great that the new Uchiha are beginning to see how much they would lose if they had killed Itachi, he is such a great asset and I think he will eventually redeem himself. I really want to see you work the becoming and uncle angle....maybe that will even make him seem more human.
I'm glad that Kimimaro is leaving, I did not like the way he developed for this story. He was too cold and not worthy of Gaara or of the new Uchiha. I hope the people in Tarrasade will not be brutal towards Itachi, they need to hear Sasuke explain his decision to let his brother live.
Anyway looking forward to more thanks for the short update
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off I would lime to say that Ive never read something this long (chapter-wise) before and that this is one story I absolutely adore. It took me three days just to get to chapter 76 and now you're up to 86! How far you've come!
I'd like to ask why Naruto is still thinking of the babies and kits as two entities. It sounds stupid because they are two sets, but since you already went over a chapter where Naruto wonders if he'll love the kits the same as the babies, why are the kits ranked of lesser importance to the babies in this chapter, if he were forced to choose?
It sounds so depressing to me!
I also cannot wait to see the birth of the children, since children always bring about new and different sides of character; people grow and learn and change, so I'm really anticipating that.
And the Kisame/Haku/Itachi threesome.
But mostly the birth of the children.
Keep writing! This story is amazing!
I'd like to ask why Naruto is still thinking of the babies and kits as two entities. It sounds stupid because they are two sets, but since you already went over a chapter where Naruto wonders if he'll love the kits the same as the babies, why are the kits ranked of lesser importance to the babies in this chapter, if he were forced to choose?
It sounds so depressing to me!
I also cannot wait to see the birth of the children, since children always bring about new and different sides of character; people grow and learn and change, so I'm really anticipating that.
And the Kisame/Haku/Itachi threesome.
But mostly the birth of the children.
Keep writing! This story is amazing!
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So...the Klennethon guy returns. I admit I am looking forward to it.
I hope that Kabuto is not up to his old tricks. Encountering this new Itachi would not be good for his health.
And he made off with Orochimaru's body--is it possible the man is alive?!
I hope that Kabuto is not up to his old tricks. Encountering this new Itachi would not be good for his health.
And he made off with Orochimaru's body--is it possible the man is alive?!
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Although I find the new delevopment between Haku and Itachi quite strange (it's very rare to see someone willingly go into a relationship with their attacker no matter how differently they act and in Itachi's case, his memory loss) but since they are both in it for Kisame, I will try to look at it in a different way. You brought the minkies again! I seiously like them...wish I had a gang of minkies!
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I missed you:) I loved the visual of them setting around after the simulations! I'm falling for Haku more and more I love the way you have portraited him. Beauitful sexy deadly smart all in a loving way:) Haku is a fine princess to Iruka queen ^_^
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 49 I realized that I failed to give you due respect for his temper tantrum in the last chapter. It was the first time that I saw pure emotion unleashed in your story and I fail to comment on it. As for this professional hero thing it seems really promising in that they will be faced with a series of problems and have to solve them in unique ways which is a type of story I always like to read. At this point I'm seeing lots of promise in the story and can easily see how it expanded to over 80 chapters. If it wasn't in this form I'm guessing it would be more of a series then one continuous novel. Am I correct in that?
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd been avoiding this because it's sooo long :P and because I wasn't sure about the idea of Naruto in Space!
I haven't been able to stop reading since I started. I'm only on the 39th chapter, but I had to review.
"My Zabuza was a Hinata"... absolutely heartbreaking. I hope you continue to write, you are very talented. I hope you find (or have found?) your own original story; I imagine it's probably there inside. I know the passion of writing these stories, but you write space opera so well, it deserves a bitter audience. IMHO.
Thank you so much for the gift of your story.
I haven't been able to stop reading since I started. I'm only on the 39th chapter, but I had to review.
"My Zabuza was a Hinata"... absolutely heartbreaking. I hope you continue to write, you are very talented. I hope you find (or have found?) your own original story; I imagine it's probably there inside. I know the passion of writing these stories, but you write space opera so well, it deserves a bitter audience. IMHO.
Thank you so much for the gift of your story.
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 46 At first I thought Haku was being insensitive to Konohamaru in the beginning and then I thought perhaps he was just trying to manipulate him for Konohamaru's own good. Then I remembered what you told me and I realized he was simply being honest. Now I wonder what I would've thought of that scene and they're apparently developing relationship if I had not been shown what was in the box.
As for the structure of this chapter it works which isn't too helpful I guess. A lot of short scene adding up to something more although there were a few that might have been flushed out only because it left me a little confused. Maybe I'm just not a good reader.
As for the structure of this chapter it works which isn't too helpful I guess. A lot of short scene adding up to something more although there were a few that might have been flushed out only because it left me a little confused. Maybe I'm just not a good reader.