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Chapter 47 reveals an interesting morality. I have to say I'm holding out hope that there's more to this photo thing than meets the eye, but I didn't pick up on any clues if you dropped any. Anyway, I can see your love for old science-fiction shining through in this chapter especially strong.

Chapter 48 I'll admit I'm a bit confused. I can see some of the tension between Naruto and Sasuke, but there also seemed to be some hints of trouble between Neji and Shikamaru which completely left me scratching my head. Maybe I should just call it a night.

Chapter 45Considering how you play with ages you describe the new character quite well. Referring to him as the boy was pretty vague considering how wide that term can be used. However, it really worked. The entire time I had this sense that no one could get much of a read on him which added to an air of mystery and suspense although both of those words are probably too strong. It was a unique way to describe a new character. Unlike before I didn't feel I was being denied information. Overall I felt this chapter was handled quite adeptly.

Oi its to much my computers been busted since you posted chapter 76 that was the last one i read just got it fixed and now i find im 8 chapters behind so much to read so little time to do it. Oh well, I just have to get started tonight after work, wish i could start now though.

It seems chapter 44 will reveal me to be a horrible person. I'm actually kind of happy that Konohamaru was having a rough time. It was becoming a little tedious how easily everyone accepted their lot in life. It may be mature, but let's face it people are not like that. Yes some characters like Naruto and Sasuke have a reason for being like that, but Konohamaru definitely didn't.

This is the first time I saw a clear reference and understood exactly what the e-machine are and on some level I find them rather repugnant. Which is weird coming from me.

However, most of all I finally feel like the stories moving again. The previous chapters were billed up I guess, but I didn't have a sense of movement in them. I like the fact that you name the ship after the third team mate in the series which is probably what most people wanted to see her in a minimized position. Maybe I'm being a bit cynical on that. Anyway you misspelled Naruto again towards the end of the discussion of the desk. As for the desk, the symbolism is not really working for me, but I'm one of those type of people who will have such things go over the head quite easily.

Chapter 38 I'm trying to figure out which thing they're redesigning. Is it the original compound or is it one of those motherships?

Chapter 29 A definite improvement over the last mature seen. More detailed and a reference to lubrication which is always nice to see in my opinion. Still, overall the story feels like it's dragging a little and I'm not sure if that's just because of the last arc or more symptomatic of the story.

Chapter 30 I have read so many combat scenes in space that it's hard to know what I expect from them anymore. However, at least the readers were given more information about how the universe works. Up until now I've been assuming that the ships operate on some faster than light drive and not using jump gates. Still, interesting that there are people out there still willing to help Sasuke.

So chapter 35 was pretty interesting. I would've liked to seen Konohamaru a bit less mature or perhaps a tad bitter before seeing the video of the battle. There was really nothing wrong with the way you showed him though, but everyone is so mature in this story.

I quite like the beginning of the meeting and how there were so many different levels to it. It shows how complex the situation was and you carried it off quite well.