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person roro237
schedule May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That chapter was the greatest! I went alittle soft when Sasuke hugged and took the painting from the 3yr. That was so sweet. He'll be a great dad. Of couse you contuine to make me fall more and more in love with Naruto:) The way he growled from the door way oh I loved that! Only Kakashi would push the envelope like that. But the best was last with what Naruto said at the meeting! The icing on that hold thing was him talking about their litter of nine:) I read in amaze-ment at your skills as a writter! You covered so much in this chapter and wOw I loved it! PS I think I see the "Consequences"! I'm going to say it was the Kakashi and Sasuke thing?! You done have to answer I just wanted to tell you what I think it was ok ^_^
person SSB
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't normamlly review for a story. I also never review on this website. Eitherway I want say how interesting I find this piece. I find the world you have weazed and the suddle way you show the realtionship between each character, especially in the sex-department, is very refreshing. I must say I find myself waiting for the next update and have already told a friend or two that they need to read it.

I hope you continue to write it till it's done.
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know what Itachi did was completly and utterly horrible, but right now i feel so sorry for him. poor guy.
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was quite happy to read the lemon, thank you for putting it there.

What is Itachi up to? And how does Tayuya work as a cat?
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the lemon was fine not as long as usual, but still good.
i hope someone comes in to try to befriend itachi....i feel so badly for him....i'm hoping maybe the collector will take and interst in him since he is just as beautiful as sasuke, and a genius as well????
person roro237
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW this was wonderful! Naruto just needed to be reassured and by the sounds and the blessing out Sasuke did a fine job of it:) As always the lemon was divine:) Thank you for your hard work. I'm in love with Naruto so his point of view was special to me. No one can have nine kids and not have some kind of melt down:) The breakfast table was just as interesting to! The title was dead on. I loved it all ^_^
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Talk about sweet revenge. o_o Haku knows how to cut Itachi like a knife.

Although I want to be proud of Itachi of putting others before himself now.
person meowkuu2
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
........damn...I feel like Itachi might end up snapping again..though I'm not too sure if it would be the homicidal snap or just go plain out crazy snap.. but I doubt he can eliminate his jealousy that easily.. he'll need a healthy dose of distraction and something to let off steam/building rage... hmm maybe Sasuke can help out with that?
person Anon
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how to feel about this chapter.....I'm sad, a bit excited, proud of Haku, and quite a bit nervous about Itachi.....my hope is that he will be okay.....I wonder if you will continue to develop his character more deeply? I still hold hope that he will learn to allow himself to be physically intimate with someone so that in some way he can defeat his father's influence in his life....that he will learn that he was and is worthy of being loved and of loving....anyway I liked the chapter.....even if it is a bit bitter sweet...looking forward to your 80th chappie.....hopefully soon.
person Nivell
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter hurt..it's quite sad that Itachi won't allow himself to share the intimacy with Kisame since sex for him makes him think of the rape. I hope that someday he and Kisame would share a sexual bond like Naruto and Sasuke. In the mean time, it is nice to see Kisame and Haku back together.