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Really excited to see who you've decided as the 9 other elite Uchiha.

Gah. Things _are_ looking bleak but I trust your author's note!

I found you Haha. Why are there black diamonds throughout the story? And which one comes after this story?

I found you Haha. Why are there black diamonds throughout the story? And which one comes after this story?

I've started to read this fanfic ... about a week ago. I wanted to review around chapter 20 already when you mentioned that you should invest so much effort into a fanfic ... rather in an original story. however, I realized you actually already started a 3rd story on this XDD I'm glade you continued :)
It's quite rare that somebody is writing a fanfic which is placed in a sci-fi universe ^^ ... I like sci-fi which is why I started reading it :) maybe my opinion is not that good since I don't have much experience in reading sci-fi fics, but I think you describe it rather well. I think your universe is kind of ... realistic? ..if you can call it like that hahaha the only thing which I kind of miss .... is there no uhm .... government like thing? or are the planets so far all kinda self regulated.
Anyway ... the plot is so much different then in the manga XDDD I kinda feel sorry for itachi :// ... sasuke is so ... reasonable in this story hahaha he almost gets annoying in the manga for being so teme XDD
Anyway, I'll continue reading an hope you haven't stopped writing when I reach the 3rd story ... but I'll probably review again before that XDDD

omg omg oomg! what did you do to itachi!!! aaarg I already felt sorry for him before that! now I feel so so .. T_T aaarg and then it was not even the crazy killer itachi, it was the more sane itachi T_T ... well i uhm ... to be honest I didn't read naruto ... I read enough chapters to get the overall plot, but I don't know much about many characters (which is why I sometimes don't get it if you introduce a OC XD ... to me many characters are unknown haha) Ochimaru is one of the characters I don't know much ... but his snake like tongue was enough for me that he is perverted XD. but here ... he's ....... aaarg damn need to read until I find a chapter where I can stop T_T

As I an re-reading this story, I find myself increasingly annoyed by Naruto. He is wonderful, beautiful and lots of other positive things. But he tends to blaim Sasuke a lot for lots of different things, mostly without thinking about why Sasuke does the things he does. For example, the issue of Shika parenting one of the babies, I blame that solely on Naruto. Naruto has a bad habit of demanding promises from Sasuke, and when Sasuke does it, the only way it is possible, he then clanders Sasuke for it. It was not fair to Shika, though I love the little bundle of constantly-thinking-joy Haru will turn into because of his genes. And Shika taking care of Haru is possibly the cutest thing ever.

I am on chapter 61th at the moment, and i decided to have a break and tell u a bit about ur story.
I sttarted reading it after I saw a fanart made for u, with Shikamaru holding a baby.
It got me curious.
And then i got hooked.
And It's my first review on this website (i usually use Y!gal or ff).
But i wanted to tell u that the story is very oryginal and nicely written.
I had mixed feeling only once, when u introduced the OC and Kabuto, cuz i was scared that it would turn into some forced Angst story.
But it didn't
I love it, that u make the chhaacters simply live, trying to fix problems, interacting with others and changing others.
It's light and entertaining and interesting.
I like Kisame a lot in this story, and i am so happy about what u did with him.
And, really, thank u for writing this story.
It's a one of a kind adventure.
Greetings! =)

Hi, I found out your story from Shika/Neji community and this is the first ever sci-fi I have ever read, I think... Certainly the first slash one, so far I like the way you built the entire story: it's very apparent that you put considerable amount of effort and time which is admirable. It's society created with complex culture,rules and even calendars. But Sex Rule №1 just makes me want to howl >_<. Are you sure you don't even want to write Shikamaru & Neji's first time? Because it's like GUH when you read a story 62 chapters and find out that what's promised to be a very very interesting scene gets zero words/attention. Victim of snufflers,(which would amount to gang-serial-rapist organization) Neji just go through a few days of therapy and then just bam! We find out that Shikamaru & Neji already had their err special first time in a single sentence in scene of emergency which says "fallen asleep after fucking". So incredibly disappointing, I already thought it was a crying shame that Shikamaru's putting up scenes was not detailed enough as it was.... *rant done* Oh well, now that it's out of the way, I will congratulate you on a story well-written if not a little too Sasuke-centered ^^. (I have prejudice against Sasuke and even more so against Sasuke/Naruto/Sasuke the only thing that kept me reading was your style of writing and the adding of different characters which is interesting for me because I always selectively read character-growth stories which have few character but really goes deep into their psychology and makes them act according thusly: certainly not action-centered nor have this many character who keep getting added every chapter) Wow this must be the longest rant I have written ^^; heh anyway so is there any hope that you will write more in-depth ShikaNeji or should I just resign myself and try to skip SasNaru sex scenes as I have been doing? Oh and please tell me that Shikamaru doesn't die in 63? Sorry for schloping such a big heapful on you in just review but *wails* you know about expectations dashed this spectacularly

I really loved this story. I don't know how or why but it just swallowed me in... I wish it would never end, just as I wish that he original Naruto (manga or even anime)would never end. On the other hand I hope that even when the original series ends, new fan fics will still be written. Thank you for such a wonderful story!