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person meowkuu2
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter..like..great chapter..as usual you have me on the edge of my seat gripping the computer...
Now names....well..nothing with "H" since the first three kids have that already.... ( Are you planning to make all six kits survive? That's pretty impressive...but I imagine that not all of them will be..."sane" so to speak...)
I think the crew should get into what to name them too since it will definitely be a full time job looking after all those kids...

RANDOM NAME IDEAS:
MALE
- Kenji meaning intelligent second son, strong and vigorous
- Lunn meaning strong, warlike
- Oron meaning light, joy

FEMALE
- Adina meaning gentle,noble delicate
- Lenna meaning lion's strength
- Sachi/ Sachiko meaning child of joy

yea...randomness
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter and am eagerly awaiting whatever you come up with next.
person meowkuu2
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! I don't know what to think anymore!!! Suppose Itachi flips???? The minks???? The fox babies??? Why the hell is Kiba such an asshole? ( personally I wouldn't mind if someone brought him down a notch or two)...THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!! *HUGS*
person morlana
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Thanks for updating. Was wondering will the hybrids have the same connection to Naruto as the children since they are not being comforted by his heartbeats. Will he and Kiba have an altercation so they know who is who in the canine world. I know Kiba is special but he is showing insubordination. Maybe they need to figure out that though he does have experience, he shouldn't be too dismissive. I do like that he'll have an aggressive relationship with Rin.
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did you ever think there would be 76 chapters of this story? I can hardly believe it myself.

It's a phenomenon.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i just read this for the first time i love it i cryed when you shortend narutos life span i cant wait for the next ch
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY gOD!!! How did I miss this update again??? I had to go looking for the story and sure enough I missed it....UGH...You left us with such an evil cliffy???

*begs for Itachi's life on knees*.....Please don't kill him....

I was never sure I wanted him dead maybe just in cryo or tanked for a long time....but now that he is Sane again...OMG...he is such a good character I've loved the last 2 chappies with him killing Oro and now back in the Uchiha fold. I hope someone else speaks up for him, he may not have completely redeemed himself, but he does deserve another chance to make things right. Oh man I'm so torn....again thanks for the update great chapter once again.
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG YES WIN WIN WIN!!!

You let him live. Things I loved

1. Kiba...He is so adorable and I loved his interaction with Naruto
2. Itachi..Still think he needs to be allowed to live I hope Haku decides to speak for him if only for Kisame's sake.
3. Love the Minkies....how funny that they are already bonded to Tachi
4. You Rock! I hope Kimimaro is one of the young men...I'm still holding out hope that he is Gaara's love interest...that would be sooo hot!
person roro237
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I missed you! I know it hasn't been that long it just feels like it has:) You had me cracking up at Sasuke thinking about Naruto can lick his own balls:) I'm still giggle at that part. That was so funny to me:) The title fit perfectly. Poor Sasuke stomach was churning will all the things a leader has on his shoulders. I think he's done well:) I loved this chapter! ^_^
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I am so happy to see this chapter! I HAVE MISSED YOU!

LOL I adore the way Kiba and Naruto are fussing over the babies. Kiba the wet nurse. It's too much, LOL!