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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is quite an epic ass tale! I love it. Everyone has a unique personality, and everytime I pick a favorite you have to go and make someone else lovable.
And oh those poor boys. Nine babies!? I almost cried FOR them haha. Good thing they have a small village for a crew to help. Its funny and amazing how many chapters this story has so far and there's still quite a bit to go from what I can tell. Maybe have a Part 2? Just a thought.
On a sidenote I've been dying to tell you about a song that everytime I hear I think about this story and the Uchiha empire. It's called 'The Royal We' by Silversun Pickups, I think you'd enjoy it ^_~
And oh those poor boys. Nine babies!? I almost cried FOR them haha. Good thing they have a small village for a crew to help. Its funny and amazing how many chapters this story has so far and there's still quite a bit to go from what I can tell. Maybe have a Part 2? Just a thought.
On a sidenote I've been dying to tell you about a song that everytime I hear I think about this story and the Uchiha empire. It's called 'The Royal We' by Silversun Pickups, I think you'd enjoy it ^_~
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sasuke won't kill Itachi! I find it quite sad that they had to pod the minkies so that they wouldn't become too attached to Itachi. To me, he's like their Mama! =)
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi,
well I don't know how I manage to reach this chapter so fast (guest i'm glue on your story in my free time, bad me). To give my input for Gaara's mate (if not yet found):
Itachi (i found him and Gaara a sexy pair): he is already a character in the story. Only problems with him if i understud well, he treats hybrid like things or possession. Plus, what he did to Sasuke, even if now he appears with amnesia.
Kimmimaru (i have never read a story with him and Gaara as a pair): antagonist true, but only due to fate. As a see in the original Naruto, he suffer the same fate as Haku. They reach to the only ones who show any interest in them.
Keep with the good work, you can do it.
read you later :)
well I don't know how I manage to reach this chapter so fast (guest i'm glue on your story in my free time, bad me). To give my input for Gaara's mate (if not yet found):
Itachi (i found him and Gaara a sexy pair): he is already a character in the story. Only problems with him if i understud well, he treats hybrid like things or possession. Plus, what he did to Sasuke, even if now he appears with amnesia.
Kimmimaru (i have never read a story with him and Gaara as a pair): antagonist true, but only due to fate. As a see in the original Naruto, he suffer the same fate as Haku. They reach to the only ones who show any interest in them.
Keep with the good work, you can do it.
read you later :)
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I have to review chapter 75 AGAIN. Because I had a mini-orgasm over that final scene where Sasuke was standing like a pissed-off warrior over his brother with a sharp knife at his throat. OMFG that was YUMMY! Itachi submitted! Itachi, the man who survived a bull-style gang-rape and then turned around and killed all the men and their leader before he was even fully healed! If by some twist of fate he manages to survive additional folly, he would be quite a formidable opponent to anyone who sought to harm Sasuke. To think of them fighting side-by-side--OMFG I just had another one!
LOL I love how a full-blood Uchiha was kidnapped, not because he was Itachi Uchiha, but because someone wanted Kisame. Mannah, I love you for the way you demonstrate that EVERYONE in this fic has their worth, not just Uchiha. And I applaud you once again.
LOL I love how a full-blood Uchiha was kidnapped, not because he was Itachi Uchiha, but because someone wanted Kisame. Mannah, I love you for the way you demonstrate that EVERYONE in this fic has their worth, not just Uchiha. And I applaud you once again.
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOO Don't kill Itachi!!! I'm starting to really like him and I love how he's the leader of his minky crew!! Seriously, that scene where he and Kiba are training the little minkies? SOOO Cutee!!!! I'm sad that some of them died (are they actually children human/mink hybrids) and that Orochimaru and Kabuto perverted their creations and abused them. I hope that Itachi's minkies will stay with his crew!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! How do you do it? Go directly to the nearest Hollywood studio and become screenwriter of the next biggest hit movie or tv series!!!
Action, emotion, plot and PERFECT pacing.
Action, emotion, plot and PERFECT pacing.
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! very intense! wonder if Sasuke really does slit Itachi's throat?
~excellent as always!
~excellent as always!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!! That was awesome!!!!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!! That was amazing!!! I'm torn between wanting to help Itachi vs. him getting what he deserves...then...Sauske is taller than him??!!! Didn't see that coming....what's gonna happen to Kiba and the minks???? *waves hand frantically*