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I know that I am probably late with who should be Gaara's but with the symbiote making people superhuman I think it should be Lee. Just my opinion

I had put off reading the rest of this story because I could not take the cliff hanger you left after Kabuto's raid. Now I have gotting caught up and I must say I love that you have add Kiba to the story and I hope he will join Uchia, I'm not dissapointed in what you have done to Itachi and personally I hope that if he gains his memory back he will not became the same person he once was. You've done it once more though left me with a cliffy thats going to have me continously looking for an update that I will not have the patiences to let biuld up.

I love your story and I adore your writing style and capability, I hope this will not be the only story you share with us.

I didn't see that coming.....I did not see that coming...like...how is Itachi gonna react to when he sees sasuke in person..if he even does...wow...

I love you story and am eagerly awaiting updates.

I just love Kimimaro. It would be awesome if you could put him in your story.

Gaara getting embarassed over Haku's butt is so endearing. I think I like the idea of Haku being his mate. As for Kiba, he sounds like such a sweetie!! His co-existing relationship with Kabuto is strange yet they probably trust each other...I hope he'll be able to escape with Itachi!

Kiba is awesome!! I think he's my new favorite character. He's a good human/hybrid..even though he knows that Kabuto did some horrible things, he still was at some point loyal to him. Loyal enough to not want him dead. Kiba's little note saying he killed the foetuses because it was kinder was poignant. The saddest thing in this fic was the senseless deaths of the little mink hybrids...reading that scene made me really sad. And now Itachi will be reunited with the new Uchiha crew.

I am really glad Kiba snuck up on you. He is a close third when choosing my favorite Naruto characters with Sasuke and Naruto taking up positions 1 and 2. The plot thickens concerning Itachi. It will be interesting to see which direction you choose to take him: does he die tragic hero, is he redeemed, or does he fall back into madness? Of course I have my own personal favorite, but I have enjoyed where you have taken this, so I'll continue to trust in your judgement.

I do have a suggestion on updates. Dont post everything you write right away. Keep some of it back and build up a buffer of 4 to 5 chapters and make a schedule for posting that meets your needs and real life situation be that weekly, monthly, or every 6 weeks. This way you will have material to post without feeling the pressure of meeting a deadline. The story is awesome enough that I would even take just a couple updates a year and continue to follow it avidly. Just take a hiatus while you build up your advance chapters. Then when you figure out how much time you have to devote to this you can determine a posting schedule you are comfortable with.

And by all means don't fall into the trap that snares to many authors. You are under no obligation to us. You write for you own personal reasons and we are lucky to be invited along for the ride. It frustrating when a good story isn't finished and dropped by an author for whatever reason be it motivation, lack or interest, real life, etc. Juggling all of your commitments is difficult enough without adding to it by letting a piece of fanfiction become like a real life job. You aren't getting paid, and I do realize that if writing stops being enjoyable, authors tend to stop writing. So take however much time you need, and make sure you are happy and comfortable. Thanks for writing and inviting us into your world.

Halskr

This chapter was very breath taking! I am curious as to how Itachi will react to the truth that he doesn't remember and I wish that Kiba hadn't sent that message! DX

Thank you for the update! I hope that people stop bugging you for updates and you are able to concentrate on more important things like paying the internet bill and other bills... ^^;;;

You got to watch out for them fully developed characters. Once you've rounded out their personalities in your mind they disregard everything else you've got planned and take over. lol

Keep up the great work!