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BRAVO!!!!

Ding-dong, the witch is dead! In canon Itachi only cut off Orochi-chan's hand, looks like he got to finish the job in this fic! I guess it takes a devil to off one, eh? HAH!

I guess fanfiction is what happens when you're making other plans, yes?

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!

I love Naruto Fanfiction,and Naru/Sasu pairing, but got a little burnt out on it. The other day I was bored and descided to check out one of my fav pairings, and ran across your story. I wasnt going to read it at first, (I dont usually like furturistic stories)but the amount of chapters was what drew me. You had obviously put a lot of work into the story to write so much. So I decided to give it a try. By the end of the first chapter I was hooked. I couldnt stop reading it. While it took me a few days to read all 74 chapters; never was i dissatisfied with the time spent. You are a very gifted writer, and you have managed to restore my interest in Naruto Fanfiction. I thank you for hard work that you put into your story. I eagarly look forward to reading more when you post it.

Thank you again

LadyAnocsona

LOL can anyone resist Haku?

Hooray! Kiba's here!

Kiba is fiesty as usual ^_^ I look forward to Gaara having a mate. Haku may be a good choice, because Haku need someone to care about and he seems more willing to teach someone how to love him :) Kisame belongs to itachi so Haku will need someone.

Oh my God this story is addictive. Staying up til the early hours of the morning reading it and then reading what I couldn't get to the next day when I'd only meant to read a couple of chapters - that kind of addictive. I'd seen this pop up as it was updated in the Naruto section and resisted reading it at first as it was a long WIP; I've gotten into long WIPs before only to find they're unfinished and apparently abandonded so I can be wary of them. I finally caved though and I'm so glad I did. Now I have to resist squealing every time I see there's a new chapter lol!

I love how you write the characters, building their personalities and relationships and how you make use of them as well. The world you've created is very imaginative and real, it's easy to become immersed in it. So much in this story has had me giggling or nearly crying, from Gaara's constant passing out (it probably shouldn't be so funny, but it really is) to Shikamaru and Neji's relationship. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this next.

For the "Gaara's mate" choices (I can't *wait* to see the interactions for that!) I know he is paired with Lee a lot in fics and they make a good (if slightly odd) couple. If Gai's cells were some of those in the ones stolen they could use them to make a clone and then Lee would literally be Gai's clone! *snerk*

Sumaru/Gaara - Sumaru greatly admires Naruto as a warrior and could admire Gaara as well as another berserker fighter; that admiration could grow to more. Though it would have to be handled so that he doesn't see Gaara as a Naruto replacement. Also they are both so socially awkward. (I thought it was Sai at first when I was reading about him, with some artistic liberties taken, great use of a minor, lesser known character.)

Itachi/Gaara - Just because. Heheheh. But they do have the "fathers were assholes" thing in common and I think are somewhat similar in personality. Itachi could teach Gaara about sex and I don't think Gaara would take any of Itachi's shit. It could lead to some explosive sex (and fights, which could lead to more sex).

Can't think of many more characters that haven't been used (I'm rubbish with remembering names) Sai or a member of Akatsuki maybe?

And yay! Kiba! Can't wait to see what you've got in mind for him! Sorry long review heheh. Will be looking forward to (and squealing over) another update! ^__^

PS. captcha box was "you" and "galactic". Funny and teensy bit spooky coincidence no?

rock lee. i've always loved that pairing... and i believe you could write him very well. i like what you've done so far with the rest of the crew. lee is very strong.. and it would be interesting to see how you develop him.

on the other hand... kimimaru the bone boy... whom gaara killed and lee fought, now that would be truly interesting too. however i love lee and gaara together. but kimimaru would be an interesting choice too.

or he could turn out to be yet another experiment as well...

excellent as always!
~anz