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Okay so I was running behind and I just got updated on the last two chapters...I've been doing a bit of my own stuff...and can I say again OMG!!! KIBA YES....I hope Itachi is redeemed and ends up with Kiba, and that leaves an opening for a HakuKisame pair...and for Gaara....well his fight with Kimimaro in the manga was epic and I think Kimi would be a good match for him..Kimimaro was picked up by Oro on the streets after his family was all killed so that could be a good choice...Oh well Kimi is one of my fave's I use him a lot in my fics.

Okay well again I'm always humbled by your work...it's awesome...can't wait to read more.

Poor Gaara! I hope that he finds a good mate for himself! =)

OOh, I can't wait to see who will become Gaara's mate!!

(Kisame had supported Itachi’s plan. He hoped that Sasuke could help him anchor Itachi to reality.)___So Kisame thought taking Sasuke would help Itachi and Kisame wanted no harm to come to Sasuke?

(Itachi was utterly addicted to Haku’s ability to play Sasuke. )_- But Kisame knew Itachi wanted to fuck his brother. Did Kisame think that Itachi fucking Sasuke wouldn't harm Sasuke?

quite a perverse universe you created

Hello, I'm sorry to say that I haven't reviewed before, but I have read every single chapter and I love the story you have created!!! let me repeat it again, I LOVE IT!!!!!!! Please keep up the great work!! As for a mate for Gaara, I think my number one choice would be Rock Lee. It is a very powerful fighter anyway, and he could be in some underground fighting ring or something. The symbiote would make him that much stronger and he would be there to idolize Gai like he does in the show. if Lee isn't to your liking, Kiba might work, cause he is sort of wierd anyway, or you could make him into another one of those working hybrids, he could be mixed with dog and maybe from the same creator as naruto. But seriously, alot of people do put Gaara and Lee togther, It could be a good match........ a very good match. I'd love to see it!!! ^_^

Gaara's mate is Lee, of course.

Lee would be good as Garra's mate its ether Neji or Lee for me if Naruto is already taken

You had Shino tell Anko all of Neji's most personal secrets/traumas/issues/etc--and everything Shika was doing to help him through it. Shino's character to this point is so polite and proper and respectful_that it seems unlikely he would share that information without first having the permission of Neji and Shika to tell their story/history.
And Neji nor Shika seem the type to want their most personal stuff used for gossip or teaching girlfriends lessons.
The role playing or 'scenes' sounds like fun.
The story is interesting and I enjoy a good portion of it. The parts I don't particulary like are still told well enough and written well_so kudos to you for being a talented story teller and writer. Thanks for sharing.

Kimimaro might be a good mate for Gaara. He is tough and loyal to a fault.

After reading about Itachi's treatment from his Father, I am really hoping that he is redeemable, that he was protecting Sasuke from a fate similar to his. As far as the purebred human character, I like Yahiko. He is the chidhood friend of Nagato/Pein that died and the body Pein uses that repels and atracts stuff. You could even work the peircings in as the method Orichimaru uses to try and control the symbiote. Thanks for writing and sharing this. As always I love this story!!!